Dear [Name],

Did I say that Jung Woonchan, the ex-Prime Minister of Korea, came to our University last week? I wanted to listen to his speech to apply for his lecture. About 50 students were attended it. His speech was in English so I couldn’t understand all his. I thought his main point was how Korea was able to develop, what Korea have to do from now and so on. Anyway after his lecture there was question and answer time. After all ceremony finished, all Korean attended greeted him. I was able to shake hands with him. At that time he said “are you also student?” Korean students around me laughed. I was embarrassed little and was discomforted. Anyway after greeting, we took the picture. I came back home and saw the picture. Everyone smiled but I didn’t on the picture.

Hello [이름],         I think you told me about this meeting before.  However, you didn't tell me about your embarrassing experience. I'm grateful that you are again starting to write your compositions.  Keep up the good works!  See you later! Love, Verna My corrections: Did I say that Jung Woonchan, the ex-Prime Minister of Korea, came to our University last week? >>Have I mentioned that Jung Woochan, the ex-Prime Minister of Korea, came to our university last week? I wanted to listen to his speech to apply for his lecture. >>I attended his lecture and listened to his speech well because I was hoping I can apply it soon. About 50 students were attended it. >>There were about 50 students who attended the lecture. His speech was in English so I couldn’t understand all his. >>His lecture was in English so I had a hard time understanding his speech. I thought his main point was how Korea was able to develop, what Korea have to do from now and so on. >>I thought his lecture would focus on Korea’s development, now and in the future. Anyway after his lecture there was question and answer time. >>After the lecture, there was a time for question and answer about his speech. After all ceremony finished, all Korean attended greeted him. >>After the ceremony, all Koreans greeted him. At that time he said “are you also student?” Korean students around me laughed. >>During this time, he asked “are you also a student?” and the Korean students around me laughed. I was embarrassed little and was discomforted. >>I felt a little embarrassed and uncomfortable. Anyway after greeting, we took the picture. >>After we greeted him we took some pictures. I came back home and saw the picture. >>When I arrived home I checked the pictures. Everyone smiled but I didn’t on the picture. >>Everybody on the picture smiled except me.