Dear [Name]

It's getting chillier and chillier outside. I had the heater turned on while I was driving this afternoon. Thanks for concerning about my girl friend. She would be really great if she knew that. The guy who caused the accident was totally drunken. His blood alcohol content was 0.06%, which is equivalent to license suspension for 100 days. However if there's any victims from that, revocation of the license is inevitable. His insurance company also turned its back on him, saying that it was all his fault. I know he mad a mistake but the insurance company also take responsibility partly I　think. Isn't that the reason why people sign up for insurance policy by paying pretty much money? Dog eat dog world. Yuck!! Come to think of it, the service I was about to explain was chauffeur service I guess. You'd better use chauffeur service when you drink alcohol even a glass of one. Bye.

Hello..you got a nice paragraph here I do appreciate it. I see the improvement specially with the usage of some new words.. So keep going..^^ It was great though you have to improve on your sentence construction..You can do it!^^ T.Chelsea Here are my corrections for you:   It\'s getting chillier and chillier outside. >>It\'s getting colder outside. I had the heater turned on while I was driving this afternoon. >>CORRECT Thanks for concerning about my girl friend. >>Thanks for the concern about my girl friend.  She would be really great if she knew that. >>She would really feel great if she knew that. The guy who caused the accident was totally drunken. >>The guy who caused the accident was totally drunk. His blood alcohol content was 0.06%, which is equivalent to license suspension for 100 days. >>His blood alcohol content was 0.06%, which is equivalent to a license suspension of 100 days.  However if there\'s any victims from that, revocation of the license is inevitable. >>However if there are any victims from that, revocation of the license is inevitable.  His insurance company also turned its back on him, saying that it was all his fault. >> His insurance company also turned there back on him, saying it was all his fault. I know he mad a mistake but I think the insurance company also take responsibility partly Iiiithink. >>I knew he made a mistake but the insurance company also has a responsibility. Isn\'t that the reason why people sign up for insurance policy by paying pretty much money? >>CORRECT  Dog eat,dog world. Yuck!! >>YOU MEAN TO SAY: It\'s a dog-eats-dog-world.  Come to think of it, the service I was about to explain was chauffeur service .I guess. >>CORRECT You\'d better use chauffeur service when you drink alcohol even a glass of one. Bye. >>You\'d better use chauffeur service when you knew your drunk.