Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]. I've always been thankful for your effort. Every night, I check your reply, which is really come in handy. I can feel some kind of strong bond between you and I. We discussed about a lottery winner by chance. As I already mentioned, the customer who tipped a waitress a lottery ticket already gave up his right. That's why he doesn't have any right to ask his ownership I think. When he gave his lottery ticket to waitress, he didn't even think he's going to win through the ticket. However, unexpected result happened, and he changed his mind, but it's too late. Water under the bridge, I guess. By the way, I've heard about lottery winner's behind stories. Oddly enough, they were all unhappy and their live came to be devastating. Walls have ears. People in need visit them to ask for money. What's more, some people threaten them, saying that "if you don't give money, I'll kill you." It reminds me of another expression, 'There's no such thing as a free lunch." We'd better earn money normally.
강사 첨삭
Hello there^^
Good evening^^
As always you did a good composition here again. Yes, I agree
with you that we really do have that certain connection or bond which I
can\'t explain too. Whateve it is I am happy about that because everytime we
have class I enjoy it. Thanks for your time and feedbck^^
TEACHER CHELSEA
Dear [Name].
>>Dear [Name],
I\'ve always been thankful for your effort.
>>Correct
Every night, I check your reply, which is really come in handy.
>>Every night I check your reply which really comes in handy.
I can feel some kind of strong bond between you and I.
>> Correct^^
We discussed about a lottery winner by chance.
>> Correct
As I already mentioned, the customer who tipped a waitress a lottery ticket already gave up his right.
>> Correct
That\'s why he doesn\'t have any right to ask his ownership I think.
>>Correct
When he gave his lottery ticket to waitress, he didn\'t even think he\'s going to win through the ticket.
>>When he gave his lottery ticket to the waitress, he didn\'t even think that he\'s goimg to win througj that ticket.
However, unexpected result happened, and he changed his mind, but it\'s too late.
>> Correct
Water under the bridge, I guess.
>>It\'s a water under the bridge I guess.
By the way, I\'ve heard about lottery winner\'s behind stories.
>>Correct
Oddly enough, they were all unhappy and their live came to be devastating.
>> Oddly enough, they were all unhappy and their lives resulted to be devastated.
Walls have ears. People in need visit them to ask for money.
>> Correct
What\'s more, some people threaten them, saying that \"if you don\'t give money, I\'ll kill you.
>> Correct
\" It reminds me of another expression, \'There\'s no such thing as a free lunch.\" We\'d better earn money normally.
>>Correct
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