Dear [Name]

2010-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

I've just seen the video of reckless driver. (I'm curious if you can read Korean.) It is those kind of drivers that I really hate. I'm one of the impatient drivers who'd like to drive as fast as I can, but I'm not that bad or mean. Have a great weekend. I guess I and my husband are gonna play with the iPhone this weekend of which we can't take our eyes off. :)

강사 첨삭

I had a great time with you in our classes. Thank you for your particpation.

By the way, I can't read Korean characters. I hope I can. I would love to learn more about your culture.

Take care! Enjoy your weekend with your husband. See you on Monday!

Love,

Verna

 

I've just seen the video of reckless driver. (I'm curious if you can read Korean.) 

>>I've just seen the video of the reckless driver. (I'm curious if you can read Korean.) 

It is those kind of drivers that I really hate.

>>Correct

 I'm one of the impatient drivers who'd like to drive as fast as I can, but I'm not that bad or mean. 

>> I'm one of the impatient drivers who'd like to drive as fast as they could, but I'm not that bad or mean. 
Have a great weekend.

>>Correct

 I guess I and my husband are gonna play with the iPhone this weekend of which we can't take our eyes off. :)

>> I guess  my husband and I are going to play with the iPhone this weekend of which we can't take our eyes off. :)

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