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2013-10-21 · 첨삭 강사 Liza

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Hi there! I've been hectic these days, preparing for graduate schools. Each school has a different schedule and procedures to select its students. Some of universities began to receive applications, which include application form itself, a report card during undergraduate, cover letter of self-introduction and study plan. All the things I mentioned were not familiar with me. That's why it took pretty much time and effort to finish that. Moreover, I don't know anyone to ask about graduate schools. I'm getting nervous and afraid if I won't be able to make it. If I pass the first stage, interview also will be the problem. As I apply for English education department master's degree, interview is going to be proceeded totally in English. Thanks to you, Chelsea, now I'm quite confident with communicating in English but this is completely different. Some sort of stage fright I guess. To make matter worse, I don't think we just have a casual conversation during the interview. There must be special knowledge learnt from major subjects. Unfortunately, I've already forgotten almost every thing. Bye. See you tomorrow afternoon.

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Hi there! I\'m so glad that you are becoming more confident with your English skills! I know interviews are quite nerve racking, but I know you will be able to pass your interview easily. Don\'t be so nervous because I believe that you can do it! You\'re doing well in our lessons lately and I hope that the things you have learned from me will be able to help you in your upcoming interview. I wish you luck and God Bless! See you^^ T.Chelsea Here are some of your corrections: Hi there! >>CORRECT I\'ve been hectic these days, preparing for graduate schools. >> It has been hectic these days, preparing for graduate schools. Each school has a different schedule and procedures to select its students. >>CORRECT Some of universities began to receive applications, which include application form itself, a report card during undergraduate, cover letter of self-introduction and study plan. >> Some of the universities began receiving applications including the application form itself, an undergraduate report card, a cover letter containing self-introduction, and a study plan. All the things I mentioned were not familiar with me. >> I am not familiar with all the things that I have mentioned. That\'s why it took pretty much time and effort to finish that. >> CORRECT Moreover, I don\'t know anyone to ask about graduate schools. >> Moreover, I don\'t know anyone whom I can ask about graduate schools. I\'m getting nervous and afraid if I won\'t be able to make it. >> Do you mean: I\'m going to be nervous and afraid if I won\'t be able to make it >>Or do you mean: I\'m nervous and afraid that I won\'t be able to make it. If I pass the first stage, interview also will be the problem. >> If I pass the first stage, the interview will also be a problem. As I apply for English education department master\'s degree, interview is going to be proceeded totally in English. >> Applying for a Master\'s degree in an English Education Department requires an interview in full English. Thanks to you, Chelsea, now I\'m quite confident with communicating in English but this is completely different. >> Thanks to you, Chelsea. Now I\'m quite confident in communicating in English, but this is completely different. Some sort of stage fright I guess. >> Some sort of stage fright, I guess. To make matter worse, I don\'t think we just have a casual conversation during the interview. >> To make matters worse, I don\'t think we will be having just a casual conversation during the interview. There must be special knowledge learnt from major subjects. >> There must be a special knowledge learnt from major subjects. Unfortunately, I\'ve already forgotten almost every thing. >> Unfortunately, I\'ve already forgotten almost everything. Bye. See you tomorrow afternoon. >> CORRECT

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