Dear [Name]

Thank you for calling me everyday without any exceptions. I made a mistake so I couldn't answer the phone yesterday. I want to apologize for that. Isn't it too late, right? As I'm preparing for graduate schools these days, I try to remind me of what I've studied during last four years, majoring in English literature. And I predict what kind of questions will they ask for the interview? How about this? People was born with a special ability so called LAD(language acquisition device) to acquire their mother tongue automatically, which only exists when they are young. What do you think? My answer would be "Yes I do." Because no one can't speak their mother tongue even if some of them don't know how to write and read. Regardless of their intelligence, everyone can communicate each other by using their language. But when we begin learning a second language later, we can't help facing so many difficulties. LAD is not available any longer when we grew up. Furthermore, our mother tongue continuously interrupts what we learnt about a second langue. But I've gone through same difficulties when it comes to acquiring a foreign language. That's why I'm here. I want to study more about how to accomplish a second, third, and fourth language even when our LAD's gone. Bye.

Hi there!^^

You are a very nice student and I understand that you did not intend to do a mistake yesterday. No one is exempted in committing mistakes so don\'t you worry. I am impressed of your sentence compositions. Your word selections are very good. You ommitted a word or article that made a sentence grammaticaly wrong but I believe that you can improve. Overall, your idea and your sentences are great.

Keep up the good job and good luck in your preparation for a graduate school. 

T. Chelsea^^

Thank you for calling me everyday without any exceptions.

>>CORRECT!

 I made a mistake so I couldn\'t answer the phone yesterday.

>>CORRECT!

 I want to apologize for that.

>>CORRECT!

 Isn\'t it too late, right?

>>CORRECT!

 As I\'m preparing for graduate schools these days, I try to remind me of what I\'ve studied during last four years, majoring in English literature.

>>Since I\'m preparing for the graduate schools these days, I try to remember what I studied during the last four years in English literature, my major.

 And I predict what kind of questions will they ask for the interview?

>>And I predict what kind of questions they will ask for the interview.

 How about this?

>>CORRECT!

 People was born with a special ability so called LAD(language acquisition device) to acquire their mother tongue automatically, which only exists when they are young.

>>CORRECT! ( just change the WAS with WERE)

 What do you think?

>>CORRECT!

My answer would be \"Yes I do.\" Because no one can\'t speak their mother tongue even if some of them don\'t know how to write and read.

>>CORRECT!

OR: I believe that with LAD, anyone can speak their mother tongue even if they do not know how to read and write.

Regardless of their intelligence, everyone can communicate each other by using their language.

>>Regardless of their intelligence, everyone can communicate with each other by using their language.

 But when we begin learning a second language later, we can\'t help facing so many difficulties.

>>CORRECT!

 LAD is not available any longer when we grew up.

>>CORRECT!

Furthermore, our mother tongue continuously interrupts what we learnt about a second langue.

>>Furthermore, our mother tongue continuously interrupts what we learned about a second language.

But I\'ve gone through same difficulties when it comes to acquiring a foreign language.

>>CORRECT!

 That\'s why I\'m here.

>>CORRECT!

I want to study more about how to accomplish a second, third, and fourth language even when our LAD\'s gone.

>>CORRECT!

 Bye.