Dear [Name]
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Time flies especially when we were on the phone. When I was a student of university, I used to have many opportunities to practice English with natives. However it's hardly possible to have a chance except for talking on the phone with you, Chelsea. When I was younger, I just tried to talk strangers on the street if they were foreigners. I think I was crazy a lot. Everytime I watched the movie or drama, I memorized some expressions so that I can use the expressions to any natives I bumped into anywhere. "Can I talk to you for a sec?" "Do I know you?" "You look familiar." ect.. Frankly, I really wanted to use "Put the gun down." but I haven't been in that situation yet. ^^ Come to think of it, I just came up with a good idea for upcoming weekend, my lad's wedding ceremony. In the middle of ceremony, I give the bride and groom a special mission, which would be when I play the piano and sing a song, groom kisses his bride exact perfect timing I say "love" cuz the song I'm gonna sing is full of 'loves' in the lyrics. How do you like? It goes without saying that boring wedding ceremony is never welcomed. That's why I'm concerned if I ruin the party. Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hey there!
Times does fly when we are on the phone.
We don\'t even notice that the time is already up.
Wow! You had great practice when you were still younger!
Don\'t think that you are crazy because what you did at that time helped you a lot in practicing how to speak another language and also it helped you to be more confident in speaking with other people.
I do hope that you wouldn\'t get to use the expression \"Put the gun down\" because those kinds of expressions usually happend in bad situations.
Or, if it does happen to you, I hope that it will only be use in role playing or a game.
As for the wedding, I think that what you will do will make the wedding very interesting.
I also think that what you are planning is very sweet.
Let\'s talk about how it went after the weekend okay?
t. Chelsea
Time flies especially when we were on the phone.
>>CORRECT!
OR: Time flies especially when we are on the phone.
When I was a student of university, I used to have many opportunities to practice English with natives.
>>When I was a university student, I used to have many opportunities to practice English with native speakers.
However it\'s hardly possible to have a chance except for talking on the phone with you, Chelsea.
>>CORRECT!
When I was younger, I just tried to talk strangers on the street if they were foreigners.
>>CORRECT!
I think I was crazy a lot.
>>I always thought I was crazy.
Everytime I watched the movie or drama, I memorized some expressions so that I can use the expressions to any natives I bumped into anywhere.
>>Every time I watched a movie or a drama, I used to memorize some expressions so that I can use the expressions to any native speaker that I bumped into.
\"Can I talk to you for a sec?\" \"Do I know you?\" \"You look familiar.\" ect..
>>\"Can I talk to you for a sec?\", Do I know you?\", \"You look familiar.\" etc.
Frankly, I really wanted to use \"Put the gun down.\" but I haven\'t been in that situation yet. ^^
>>CORRECT!
Come to think of it, I just came up with a good idea for upcoming weekend, my lad\'s wedding ceremony.
>>Come to think of it, I just came up with a good idea for the upcoming weekend at my lad\'s wedding ceremony.
In the middle of ceremony, I give the bride and groom a special mission, which would be when I play the piano and sing a song, groom kisses his bride exact perfect timing I say \"love\" cuz the song I\'m gonna sing is full of \'loves\' in the lyrics.
>>In the middle of the ceremony, I will give the bride and the groom a special mission which would be, when I play the piano and sing a song, the groom kisses his bride at the exact perfect timing I sing \"love\" because the song I\'m going to sing has a lot of \"love\" in the lyrics.
How do you like?
>>How do you like it?
It goes without saying that boring wedding ceremony is never welcomed.
>>It goes without saying that a boring wedding ceremony is never welcomed.
That\'s why I\'m concerned if I ruin the party.
>>CORRECT!
OR: That\'s why I\'m concerned that I might ruin the party.
Bye.
>>CORRECT!
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