Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
I really appreciate your efforts you make. You always listen to me and pay attention trivial things about me. You are like a close friend of mine I met many years ago. I don't know how to say thank you. When I hear the Philippines, you are the first who pops up my mind. By the way, how do you like essential conditions for successful language learning? Linguists, Krashen, says lower affective filter and comprehensible input are essential conditions for that. Affective filter means what interrupts learning mentally such as anxiety, concern, discouragement, and lack of motivation, etc.. And comprehensible input means input which is easy to understand. when learners hear too difficult vocabulary, they are likely to give up. That's why input must be resonable and slightly difficult. For example, fewer contractions, longer pauses, high frequency vocabulary, fewer pronoun form, and last but not least, repetition and restatement. By preparing for a graduate school, I've been busy reviewing what I learned in English literature department. All the things I mentioned remind me of you, Chelsea. You always encourage me so as to lower my affective filter. And you never hesitate to give me comprehensible inputs. Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi there once again! Happy Friday! I was so impressed with your composition today. Thank you so much for the wonderful and inspiring words! Rest assured I will do my best even more to help you. Anyway, be ready on Monday about your weekend story (^_^).
~T. Chelsea
I really appreciate your efforts you make.
>>I really appreciate the efforts you make.
You always listen to me and pay attention trivial things about me.
>> You always listen to me and pay attention to trivial things about me.
You are like a close friend of mine I met many years ago.
>> You are like a close friend of mine who I met many years ago.
I don\'t know how to say thank you.
>> CORRECT
>> OR: I don\'t know how to thank you.
When I hear the Philippines, you are the first who pops up my mind.
>> When I hear about the Philippines, you are the first to pop up in my mind.
By the way, how do you like essential conditions for successful language learning?
>>CORRECT
Linguists, Krashen, says lower affective filter and comprehensible input are essential conditions for that.
>> Linguist Krashen says lower affective filter and comprehensible input are essential conditions for that.
Affective filter means what interrupts learning mentally such as anxiety, concern, discouragement, and lack of motivation, etc.
>> Affective filters refer to things that mentally interrupt learning such as anxiety, concern, discouragement, and lack of motivation, etc.
And comprehensible input means input which is easy to understand.
>> CORRECT
when learners hear too difficult vocabulary, they are likely to give up.
>> CORRECT (You just have to observe capitalization: When...)
That\'s why input must be resonable and slightly difficult.
>> That\'s why input must be reasonable and slightly difficult.
For example, fewer contractions, longer pauses, high frequency vocabulary, fewer pronoun form, and last but not least, repetition and restatement.
>> For example, fewer contractions, longer pauses, high frequency vocabulary, fewer pronoun forms, and last but not least, repetition and restatement.
By preparing for a graduate school, I\'ve been busy reviewing what I learned in English literature department.
>> In preparing for the graduate, I\'ve been busy reviewing what I learned in English literature department.
All the things I mentioned remind me of you, Chelsea.
>> CORRECT
You always encourage me so as to lower my affective filter.
>> CORRECT
And you never hesitate to give me comprehensible inputs. Bye.
>> CORRECT
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