Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]'s getting colder and colder outside. People begin to wear warm clothes. Yes, winter is just around the corner. The thermometer says around 6 degree though, I feel warm because good lads like you always care about me. Somehow, we talked about my exes this afternoon. Just a few days ago, while I was driving and listening to music, I wiped my eyes. The lyrics are like that 'What happened? Was it so hard to live happily ever after with him? I should have kept you from walking away. I should have told you I loved you more'. I thought just letting her go was the best policy I could do. I still hope she lives much more happily. However like the lyrics, if I knew she suffered from many difficulties especially her current boy friend, I would feel really sorry, miserable, and frustrated. In my case, I could be the better man thanks to her. By causing her cry many times, I've learned so many lessons. I know it's a useless thought. But I just believe what I had done to her was not full of terrible memories she would like to erase for good. I really hope she also lives happily ever after, saying the history was not bad as I do. Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름]!
I was smiling reading your composition.^-^ It\'s great that you feel like that for her.
Anyway, thanks for sending this composition.
See you in class.
T. Chelsea
Dear [Name]>>correct!It\'s getting colder and colder outside. >>correct
People begin to wear warm clothes.
>>correct
>> OR: People are already wearing thick clothes.
Yes, winter is just around the corner.
>>correct
The thermometer says around 6 degree though, I feel warm because good lads like you always care about me.
>>correct
Somehow, we talked about my exes this afternoon. >>correct
Just a few days ago, while I was driving and listening to music, I wiped my eyes.
>>correct
The lyrics are like that \'What happened? Was it so hard to live happily ever after with him?
>>correct
I should have kept you from walking away. >>correct
I should have told you I loved you more\'.
>>correct
I thought just letting her go was the best policy I could do.
>>correct
OR
>> I thought just letting her go was the best thing I could do.
I still hope she lives much more happily.
>>correct
However like the lyrics, if I knew she suffered from many difficulties especially her current boy friend, I would feel really sorry, miserable, and frustrated.
>>correct
In my case, I could be the better man thanks to her.
>>In my case, I could be a better man. Thanks to her.
By causing her cry many times, I\'ve learned so many lessons.
>>correct
I know it\'s a useless thought.
>>correct
But I just believe what I had done to her was not full of terrible memories she would like to erase for good.
>>correct
I really hope she also lives happily ever after, saying the history was not bad as I do.
>>correct
Bye.
>>correct
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