Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey there!
Thank you for telling me more about this actor.
Thank you also for telling me the title of that song.
I highly appreciate it.
His career is very interesting.
He started out as nobody and he rose to fame with a lot of hard work.
He is very inspiring.
Like his hard work, let\'s work hard together to reach our goals.
I wish you all the best and keep up the good work!
t. Chelsea
Splendid and fantastic Thursday!
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The song you asked before is 오랜만이야 which means \'It\'s been a long time.\' sung by Korean singer&song writer Lim chang-jung also known as a movie star.
>>The song you asked before is 오랜만이야 which means \'It\'s been a long time.\' sung by Korean singer & song writer Lim Chang-Jung, who is also a movie star.
He made his debut in 1990 as a supporting actor.
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Believe it or not, when he was singing a song in karaoke, Kim hyeong-suk, very famous song writer(dubbed \'Midas touch in K-pop\'), heard his song by chance and selected him as a singer.
>>Believe it or not, when he was singing a song in a karaoke, Kim hyeong-suk, a very famous song writer(dubbed \'Midas touch in K-pop\') heard his song by chance and selected him as a singer.
So he first released his first album in 1995.
>>So, he released his first album in 1995.
he album was not bad and some mania fans were formed.
>>His album was not bad and there were some mania fans formed.
However, it didn\'t draw many people\'s attention.
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Two years later, he hit the jackpot.
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The movie, \'Beat\' caught popular favor.
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He wasn\'t main actor but played an important role as a friend of main actor.
>>He wasn\'t the main actor but he played an important role as the friend of the main actor.
In the same year, he released his third album which is full of good songs people still have in their mind.
>>In that same year, he released his third album which was full of good songs and people still remember them until today.
You know what?
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He won the best song prize twice with two songs in the same album.
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1997 was his year.
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No one could beat him at that time, even H.O.T was not exceptional, which is still considered as an ancestor of current idol groups leading Korean Waves.
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Anyway, from then on, his career in both movie and music had been successful.
>>Anyway, from that time on, his career in both movie and music had become successful.
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