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2013-11-05 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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Sicking and tiring Monday again. ^^ But keep your chin up! It's a brand new week, right? People suffer from Monday blues. But why don't we enjoy a new start of week we've never experienced. Everyday is special and everyday is worth enjoying. It was a sty that I was about to tell you. I got a sty in my eye this morning. Before I went to bed, nothing was found in my eye. However, when I woke up in the morning, I felt a little uncomfortable and found one of my eyes swollen. Now I feel much better as I took some internal and external medicine. Usually sty is caused by infection. I guess I touched a lot the eye by an unclean hand. Doctor said sty is commonly filled with pus. In case of severe swollen, simple surgery is needed to get rid of pus by cutting a little. Luckily, the symptom I showed was weak enough to take medication. He said 'wait and see till Wednesday.' As it's getting cold, people's immune system's getting vulnerable. Drinking much water and having enough fruit and vegetable are highly recommended by experts. Water and Vitamins are known as what can detoxify the body and enhance our immune system. Come to think of it, I have something to ask you. One of my friends told me bananas we usually eat in Korea are usually for animal's food in Philippines. Is that true? He said Philippine people only eat small bananas which are planted only for human. Pretty big bananas for animals could be exported to other countries. I'm just curious. Please let me know if it is true or not. Bye.

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Hey there! You are right! You should always keep your chin high with a smile on your face.   You can always try to start a brand new week with an adventure in your heart.   Well, the good thing about your sty is that it\'s not a severe one. I hope it will get better as the days go by. Always remember to wash or disinfect your hands from now on.   What your friend told you is not true. There are different kinds of bananas here in the Phillipines. There are small and short ones, long and thin ones, and fat ones. Bananas are not only animal\'s food but human\'s food as well, and not only human\'s food but animal\'s food as well. Maybe what your friend said was about a banana plantation. It\'s like a farm but the farmer\'s are planting bananas instead of other kinds of crop.   Anyway, thanks for asking me about that. We can also talk about this in our class. You can just ask me about it. See you soon! t. Chelsea   Sicking and tiring Monday again. ^^ >>Sick and tiring Monday again! But keep your chin up! >>CORRECT! It\'s a brand new week, right? >>CORRECT! People suffer from Monday blues. >>CORRECT! But why don\'t we enjoy a new start of week we\'ve never experienced. >>But why don\'t we start a new week we\'ve never experienced? Everyday is special and everyday is worth enjoying. >>CORRECT! It was a sty that I was about to tell you. >>CORRECT! I got a sty in my eye this morning. >>CORRECT! Before I went to bed, nothing was found in my eye. >>Before I went to bed, there was nothing wrong with my eye. However, when I woke up in the morning, I felt a little uncomfortable and found one of my eyes swollen. >>However, when I woke up this morning, I felt a little uncomfortable and found one of my eyes had swollen. Now I feel much better as I took some internal and external medicine. >>CORRECT! Usually sty is caused by infection. >>Usually, a sty is caused by an infection. I guess I touched a lot the eye by an unclean hand. >>I guess I touched my eye a lot wtih my unlcean hands. Doctor said sty is commonly filled with pus. >>The doctor said a sty is commonly filled with pus. In case of severe swollen, simple surgery is needed to get rid of pus by cutting a little. >>In cases of severly swollen eyes, a simple surgery is needed to get rid of the pus by cutting the sty a little. Luckily, the symptom I showed was weak enough to take medication. >>CORRECT! He said \'wait and see till Wednesday.\' >>CORRECT! As it\'s getting cold, people\'s immune system\'s getting vulnerable. >>CORRECT! Drinking much water and having enough fruit and vegetable are highly recommended by experts. >>CORRECT! Water and Vitamins are known as what can detoxify the body and enhance our immune system. >>CORRECT! Come to think of it, I have something to ask you. >>CORRECT! One of my friends told me bananas we usually eat in Korea are usually for animal\'s food in Philippines. >>One of my friends told me that the bananas we usually eat in Korea are usually animal\'s food in the Philippines. Is that true? >>CORRECT! He said Philippine people only eat small bananas which are planted only for human. >>He said Filipinos only eat small bananas which are planted only for humans. Pretty big bananas for animals could be exported to other countries. >>CORRECT! I\'m just curious. >>CORRECT! Please let me know if it is true or not. >>CORRECT! Bye. >>CORRECT!

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