Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A Wonderful Wednesday to you!
Canceling the class wasn\'t your choice. Sometimes, unexpected things happen and we have to give way. I understand how you feel about canceling our class, but I am sure that we will be able to catch-up on your lessons together. I am glad that you now have a better connection for your TV and Internet. You will no longer have a hard time dealing with bad Internet connection! Tell me more about that VOD service, okay? I want to hear more about your home improvement kkkk. Take care!
~T. Chelsea
Here are some corrections:
Hi there!
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I couldn\'t help canceling our class this morning for private reason.
>> I couldn\'t help but cancel our class this morning for a private reason.
Only one day without talking on the phone with you makes me feel weird and empty.
>> A day without talking to you on the phone makes me feel weird and empty.
I mean it seems that I didn\'t do what I have to do.
>> I mean, it seems like I wasn\'t able to do what I have to do.
My landlord sent me a text message yesterday, saying she was going to replace all the facilities about Internet and TV.
>> My landlord sent me a text message yesterday, saying she was going to replace all the facilities that involves the Internet connection and TV.
Staffs from agency came to my house and set up new devices.
>> Staff from the agency came to my house to set up the new devices.
Previously, the companies were different.
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Each company was in charge of Internet and TV.
>> A different company was in charge of the Internet connection, and another was in charge of the TV.
That\'s why sometimes there used to be troubles, which caused Internet disconnection, TV malfunction, etc..
>> That\'s why sometimes it causes trouble and it affects the Internet connection and even causes TV malfunction.
I can\'t explain specifically but some kind of conflict I guess.
>> I can\'t explain what specifically causes the problems, some kind of conflict I guess.
Now I can take advantage of much better service both Internet and TV.
>> Now I can take advantage of a better service for both the Internet and TV.
Especially, they provide VOD (Video on demand) service.
>> Especially now that they have provided VOD (video on demand) service.
I can watch every previous TV program whenever I want.
>> I can watch previous TV programs whenever I want to.
It sounds fabulous, doesn\'t it?
>> CORRECT!
Any way, my telephone we talked on is based on Internet.
>>Anyway, the phone that I used to talk to you is an Internet phone.
Probably, we will be able to talk again tomorrow.Bye.
>> CORRECT
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