Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
It's getting colder and colder outside in Korea. People I see through the window bundle up in thick coats and parkas. I hate this cold atmosphere but I can relax drinking warm tea in an office beside heater only in this season. Speaking of winter, have you ever heard about fish bread? Don't worry it's not a real fish. Some sort of pan cake which is shape of fish, which is filled with red bean or custard cream newly developed by younger generations. Sorry I've just added one more food you really want to eat in your list following octopus. I also really eager to try out so many sea food you guys enjoy very easily in your country such as lobsters, huge shrimps, clam, and shark. According to recent news article, Korean's English proficiency is not that good even if they try to invest so much money to English education. How do you feel about that? Your students including me are all the Koreans, right? Do they all speak English well or not? I know Koreans always force their students to study hard to get a good score. That's why most of Korean students especially smart students just try to get a good score, not try to enjoy English. They seem to consider English as a tool to get a high score. It's a shame. They are really great at reading and grammar. However, they are allergic to speaking, listening, and writing. I want to let them know how they can enjoy English, Anyway, I've gotta go. Bye.
강사 첨삭
Hey there!
Since it\'s getting colder there, you should also start bringing a thick coat or a parka so that you won\'t get sick.
Good to kow that you have a way of realxing during the cold weather.
And yes! You added another food I would like to eat.
And you made me very hungry just now. Hahaha!
I do hope that you would be able to enjoy the food that can be offered here in the Philippines.
I think that you would enjoy eating them.
In regards to the article that you have read and your questions.
Yes all my students are Korean.
Not all of them are good but you should also remember that some of them are still starting.
It\'s normal that they are not very good since they have just started.
Yes it is a shame that they don\'t try Enjoy learning English.
Even here in our country, English is one way to get a good job.
I hope that someday, someone (it can be you) would be able to invent a teaching style wherein the students would be able to learn English in a fun way.
Thank you for sharing a lot to me today.
t. Chelsea
It\'s getting colder and colder outside in Korea.
>>CORRECT!
People I see through the window bundle up in thick coats and parkas.
>>People I see through the windows bundle up in thick coats and parkas.
I hate this cold atmosphere but I can relax drinking warm tea in an office beside heater only in this season.
>>I hate this cold atmosphere but I can relax drinking warm tea in an office beside a heater, only in this eason.
Speaking of winter, have you ever heard about fish bread?
>>CORRECT!
Don\'t worry it\'s not a real fish.
>>CORRECT!
Some sort of pan cake which is shape of fish, which is filled with red bean or custard cream newly developed by younger generations.
>>It\'s some sort of pan cake in the shape of a fish. It\'s filled with red bean or custard cream which is newly developed by the younger generations.
Sorry I\'ve just added one more food you really want to eat in your list following octopus.
>>CORRECT!
I also really eager to try out so many sea food you guys enjoy very easily in your country such as lobsters, huge shrimps, clam, and shark.
>>I\'m also eager to try out so many sea food you guys enjoy very easily in your country such as lobsters, huge shrimps, clams, and shark.
According to recent news article, Korean\'s English proficiency is not that good even if they try to invest so much money to English education.
>>According to a recent news article, Korea\'s English proficiency is not that good even if they try to invest so much money in English education.
How do you feel about that?
>>CORRECT!
Your students including me are all the Koreans, right?
>>CORRECT!
Do they all speak English well or not?
>>CORRECT!
I know Koreans always force their students to study hard to get a good score.
>>CORRECT!
That\'s why most of Korean students especially smart students just try to get a good score, not try to enjoy English.
>>CORRECT!
They seem to consider English as a tool to get a high score.
>>CORRECT!
It\'s a shame.
>>CORRECT!
They are really great at reading and grammar.
>>CORRECT!
However, they are allergic to speaking, listening, and writing.
>>CORRECT!
I want to let them know how they can enjoy English, Anyway, I\'ve gotta go.
>>I want to let them know that they can enjoy English. Anyway, I\'ve gotta go.
Bye.
>>CORRECT!
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