Dear [Name].~
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning Lei.
How are you? I feel so good.^ ^
During this morning, I went to out side to attend a Launching Ceremony.
After all the construction are finished, a vessel move to the sea. we called it Launching. It is the first time to the vessel afloat on the sea by herself. We should take care the vessel after the Launching like a baby.
It was really impressed moment.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!!! It's nice to hear from you. I am doing good so far. I never thought that there are different kinds of ceremonies in the shipping industry. Wow. I was impressed. I can no longer wait to hear about the other details. See you later during our class.
Lei J
Good morning Lei.
>>correct
How are you? I feel so good.^ ^
>>correct
During this morning, I went to out side to attend a Launching Ceremony.
>>I went to attend a Launching ceremony this morning.
After all the construction are finished, a vessel move to the sea.
>>After finishing the ship construction, the vessel will sail to the sea.
we called it Launching.
>>correct
It is the first time to the vessel afloat on the sea by herself.
>>It will be the first time that the vessel will sail in the sea independently.
We should take care the vessel after the Launching like a baby.
>>we should take care of the vessel like a baby after launching it.
It was really impressed by the moment.
>>correct
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