Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
It's splendid and fabulous Friday. I hope you wrap up this week well so that you can enjoy brand new next week. On my way to home yesterday, I was driving on the road at the riverside where many cars pass by very fast. Traffic light turned red so I was about to pull the car near the stop line. Abruptly, a red compact car was passing by me very fast with a bang sound. The red car driver managed to stop the car in the middle of intersection. Fortunately, other cars coming from opposite side avoid the crash by switching their direction. And then the red car began to escape the place even if the light still showed red signal. In a second, another car which was a black luxury sedan began to chase the red car. All the scene, I was watching behind the stop line. The black sedan quickly overtook the red car and then the sedan blocked the red one causing the second crash. It was like a movie scene. As soon as the light turned green, all the other cars started to go. When they came close to the place the accident occurred, they all slowed down to see what happened. So did I. It seemed that the red car hit the black sedan first, and then the red car was trying to escape. The red car driver was a woman who looked in her 40s. I guess she was just afraid. That's why she did that unconsciously. Nowadays, car accidents are one of the most controversial issues in Korea, especially accident led to by women, so called Mrs. [Name]. Mrs. [Name] accident is new coined word in Korea by young people as Kim is the most common family name here in Korea. More and more women are driving their own cars but relatively women's competence when it comes to driving is worse than men. Don't get me wrong. I didn't mean to criticize all the female drivers. As the level of driver's license test is getting easier, some of them who don't have enough driving skill can get a driver's license and they just drive metal horseless carriage without concerns resulting in innocent victims. Anyway, have a nice weekend. Seeya.
강사 첨삭
Hi there!
That was really an awefull experience. Anyway, there are alot of things to consider when driving. Always take care!
Have a nice weekend.
t. Chelsea
It\'s splendid and fabulous Friday.
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I hope you wrap up this week well so that you can enjoy brand new next week.
>>I hope you wrap up well this week so that you can enjoy brand new week
On my way to home yesterday, I was driving on the road at the riverside where many cars pass by very fast.
>>I was driving so fast on my way home at a riverside yesterday.
Traffic light turned red so I was about to pull the car near the stop line. Abruptly, a red compact car was passing by me very fast with a bang sound.
>>The traffic light turned red so I pull the car near the stop line. Then a red compact car passed by me very fast with a bang sound.
The red car driver managed to stop the car in the middle of intersection.
>>The red car manage to stop the car in the middle of an intersection.
Fortunately, other cars coming from opposite side avoid the crash by switching their direction.
>>Fortunately, another car coming from the opposite side avoided the crash by switching to another direction.
And then the red car began to escape the place even if the light still showed red signal.
>>CORRECT
In a second, another car which was a black luxury sedan began to chase the red car.
>>Then another black luxury car started chasing the red car.
All the scene, I was watching behind the stop line.
>>I was watching all the scene behind the stop line.
The black sedan quickly overtook the red car and then the sedan blocked the red one causing the second crash.
>>The black sedan car went ahead the red car then it blocked the red car dausing it to crash.
It was like a movie scene.
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As soon as the light turned green, all the other cars started to go.
>>CORRECT
When they came close to the place the accident occurred, they all slowed down to see what happened.
>>When they came close to the accident area, they saw what had happened.
So did I.
>>So was I.
It seemed that the red car hit the black sedan first, and then the red car was trying to escape.
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The red car driver was a woman who looked on her 40s.
>>CORRECT
I guess she was just afraid.
>>CORRECT
That\'s why she did that unconsciously.
>>CORRECT
Nowadays, car accidents are one of the most controversial issues in Korea, especially accident led to by women, so called Mrs. [Name].
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Mrs. [Name] accident is new coined word in Korea by young people as Kim is the most common family name here in Korea.
>>Mrs. [Name]\'s addident was coined new in Korea by young people because Kim is the most common family name in Korea.
More and more women are driving their own cars but relatively women\'s competence when it comes to driving is worse than men.
>>CORRECT
Don\'t get me wrong.
>>CORRECT
I didn\'t mean to criticize all the female drivers.
>>CORRECT
As the level of driver\'s license test is getting easier, some of them who don\'t have enough driving skill can get a driver\'s license and they just drive metal horseless carriage without concerns resulting in innocent victims.
>>CORRECT
Anyway, have a nice weekend. Seeya.
>>CORRECT
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