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Fabulous and gloomy Monday again. Every brand new first weekday makes people feel good and bad simultaneously, right? My students always complain we Koreans don't have enough holidays of the year, screaming out 'I hate weekdays.' It's frustrating to think that we are happy only during holidays which fall on red numbers on the calendar. Approximately a third of the whole year is red or blue on the calendar. Then do we just endure two third of the whole year, waiting for holidays? No way. In my case, I just try to enjoy weekdays, working what I really wanted to do since when I was a university students. Isn't this what I was really looking forward to it? If you say 'yes' in this question, you will be able to enjoy your life for twenty four hours a day, seven days a week, and three hundred sixty five days a year. I know that's easier said than done but it's worth trying this. Look on the bright side. It's no use complaining current situation. Just hang in there. By the way, what do you say? I mean this morning, I was sending off my girlfriend. It was little cold outside, so I started the engine so that her car was warmed up. At that time, I found some fallen leaves on the floor under her car seat. That's why I took the mat out and dusted it by hitting the wall in a parking lot with the mat in order to remove the dirt. Suddenly too much thick dust arouse in front of my face. Fortunately all the dust was blown on the opposite side but I was totally shocked because I hit it several times more, However there's no symptom to decrease dust. It seemed that she's never cleaned inside of her car since she bought it. I just said to her 'just throw away and buy the new one.' I don't understand how she has driven her car without cleaning. Anyway, thank you for reading my message. Bye.
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I can say that you have less grammar slips, however, be careful with the use of your preposition and be very conscious to use your articles okay..?
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Fabulous and gloomy Monday again. Every brand new first weekday makes people feel good and bad
simultaneously, right?
>>It\'s a fabulous and a gloomy Monday again. Every brand new first weekdays make people feel good and bad
simultaneously, right?
My students always complain we Koreans don\'t have enough holidays of the year, screaming out
\'I hate weekdays.\'
>>My students always complain that we Koreans don\'t have enough holidays for the year, screaming out;
\'I hate weekdays.\'
It\'s frustrating to think that we are happy only during holidays which fall on red numbers on the
calendar.
>>correct
Approximately a third of the whole year is red or blue on the calendar. Then do we just endure two third of the
whole year, waiting for holidays?
>>Approximately, a third of the whole year is either colored red or blue on the calendar. Then do we just endure two third of the whole year waiting for holidays?
No way. In my case, I just try to enjoy weekdays, working what I really wanted to do
since when I was a university students.
>>No way. In my case, I just try to enjoy weekdays doing what I have really wanted to do
since I was a university student which is to work.
Isn\'t this what I was really looking forward to it?
>> Isn\'t this what I used to look forward to and anticipated?
If you say \'yes\' in this question, you will be able to enjoy your life for twenty four hours a day, seven days a week, and three hundred sixty five days a
year.
>> If you say \'yes\' to this question, you will be able to enjoy your life for twenty four hours a day, seven days a week, and three hundred sixty five days a
year.
I know that\'s easier said than done but it\'s worth trying this. Look on the bright side.
It\'s no use complaining current situation.
>>I know this is easier said than done but it\'s worth trying. Look at the bright side!
There\'s no use complaining for your current situation.
Just hang in there. By the way, what do you say?
>>correct
I mean this morning, I was sending off my girlfriend.
>> I mean this morning before I send off my girlfriend,
It was little cold outside, so I started the engine so that her car was warmed up.
>>It was a little cold outside, so I started the engine to warm up her car.
At that time, I found some fallen leaves on the floor under her car seat.
>>correct
That\'s why I took the mat out and dusted it by hitting the wall in a parking lot with the
mat in order to remove the dirt.
>>That\'s why I took the mat out and dusted it by hitting it to the wall in the parking lot in order to remove the dirt.
Suddenly too much thick dust arouse in front of my face.
Fortunately all the dust was blown on the opposite side but I was totally shocked because I hit it several times more,
>>Suddenly, a thick dust arouse in front of my face.
Fortunately, all the dust was blown on the opposite side but I was totally shocked because even if I hit it several times,
However there\'s no symptom to decrease dust.
>> there was no hope of removing or atleast decreasing the dust.
It seemed that she\'s never cleaned inside of her car since she bought it.
>> It seemed that she\'s never cleaned the inside of her car since she bought it.
I just said to her \'just throw away and buy the new one.\' I don\'t understand how she has driven her car without cleaning.
>>So I told her to just throw it away and buy a new one. I don\'t understand how could she had driven her car without cleaning it.
Anyway, thank you for reading my message. Bye.
>>Correct
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