Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Verna. Many thanks for your wake up call. :)
I think the founder of WikiLeaks, Assandge would be a good topic for us besides the cutting the number of lawyers in Korea. Curious how much right to know we have and how the government could be maintained without monopolizing the information.
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Hi [이름],
You are always welcome. I love talking to you every morning. I think
that would really be a great topic for us to talk about. Take care! Stay happy.
-Verna-
Good morning, Verna.
>> Correct
Many thanks for your wake up call. :)>> Thank you so much for your wake up call.
I think the founder of WikiLeaks, Assandge would be a good topic for us besides the cutting the number of lawyers in Korea.
>>I think the founder of WikiLeaks, Assange would be a good topic for us besides the cutting number of lawyers in Korea.
Curious how much right to know we have and how the government could be maintained without monopolizing the information.
>>I'm curious how much right to know do have and have the government could be maintained without momopolizing the information.
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