Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear [Name]
I should have sent messages earlier to you but I couldn't afford to do it. Please excuse me, such a neglecting student who never prepared for our class. Do get me wrong. I also wanted to do so many things for our class but I couldn't help focusing on my final test, which is just around the corner. We talked about my old friends this afternoon. These days, Koreans are seriously into TV drama named 'Response 1994', Actually, the series was really popular last year, so called 'Response 1997'. As you might know, 'Response 1994' is sequel of 'Response 1997'. Both of them are all about stories main actors and actresses got to join again after a long time when they grow up. And then they talked about their school days in 1997 and 1994 at each series. You know what? In 1990s, I was also a student who likes to hang around with my buddies. That's why many people can relate to the drama by remembering their own school days and childhood. Especially, Korean pop music we used to listen when we were students, social issues we experienced, and old fashions we were eager for remind us of so many good memories. A few days ago, one of my friends called me saying that he was on the business trip in Young-Ju where I was born. On his way back home, he dropped by my place and we drank soju and talked a lot searching for old pictures of us through internet cafe we made in 2001. More than 10 years, we forgot all the things we made. Yesterday, I sent several pictures to other friends. They were all surprised. We were fabulous to know they were all doing well doing their own vocations. Some of them got married, some of them have already become someone's father and mother. Thinking about we were all naive, I feel weird. Rowena, why don't you get in touch with your old friends? It won't take more effort than you expect. Your old friends are probably waiting for you.
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강사 첨삭
Hello there!
I\'m so happy to hear from you.
Don\'t worry, I understand that you\'re up to important things these days which prevented you from reading the articles. It\'s not a problem since we are still studying. You\'re right, I\'m sure my old time friends are excited to see me. Actually, I used to searched all my school mates\' name on Facebook. But then I couldn\'t find them. I think they got married sand changed their last names. ( FYI: If you get married here in the Philippines, you have to follow your husband\'s last name.) Anyway, you sounded happy saying about your old time friends.^^
Have a delightful evening!
See you!
T.Rowena
I should have sent messages earlier to you but I couldn\'t afford to do it.
>>CORRECT!
OR
>>I wanted to send messages to you earlier but I couldn\'t afford to do it.
Please excuse me, such a neglecting student who never prepared for our class.
>>CORRECT! ^^^
Do get me wrong. >>CORRECT!
I also wanted to do so many things for our class but I couldn\'t help focusing on my final test, which is just around the corner. >>CORRECT!
We talked about my old friends this afternoon.
>>CORRECT!
These days, Koreans are seriously into TV drama named \'Response 1994\', Actually, the series was really popular last year, so called \'Response 1997\'. >>CORRECT!
As you might know, \'Response 1994\' is sequel of \'Response 1997\'. >>As you might know, \'Response 1994\' is a sequel of \'Response 1997\'.
Both of them are all about stories main actors and actresses got to join again after a long time when they grow up. >>Both of them are all about stories of main actors and actresses who got to join again after a long time when they grow up.
And then they talked about their school days in 1997 and 1994 at each series.
>>CORRECT!
You know what? In 1990s, I was also a student who likes to hang around with my buddies.
>>CORRECT!
That\'s why many people can relate to the drama by remembering their own school days and childhood. >>CORRECT!
Especially, Korean pop music we used to listen when we were students, social issues we experienced, and old fashions we were eager for remind us of so many good memories.
>>CORRECT!
A few days ago, one of my friends called me saying that he was on the business trip in Young-Ju where I was born. >>A few days ago, one of my friends called me saying that he was on a business trip in Young-Ju where I was born.
On his way back home, he dropped by my place and we drank soju and talked a lot searching for old pictures of us through internet cafe we made in 2001.
>>CORRECT!
More than 10 years, we forgot all the things we made. >>After more than ten years, we forgot all the things we made.
Yesterday, I sent several pictures to other friends.
>>CORRECT!
They were all surprised. >>CORRECT!
We were fabulous to know they were all doing well doing their own vocations.
>>CORRECT!
OR
>>We were amazed to know they were all doing well doing their own vocations.
Some of them got married, some of them have already become someone\'s father and mother.
>>CORRECT!
OR
>>Some of them got married and some of them are already parents.
Thinking about we were all naive, I feel weird.
>>Thinking that we were all naive, I feel weird.
Rowena, why don\'t you get in touch with your old friends?
>>CORRECT!
It won\'t take more effort than you expect.
>>CORRECT!
Your old friends are probably waiting for you. >>CORRECT![이름]
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