Dear [Name]

2010-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Jenny

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Dear [Name], How was your trip? Last night, I waited for your call at my home, but the bell didn't ring. I noticed there was abscent rings three times at my office phone window. I am sure that you forgot promising to call to my home when it dosn'response with me. Bye

강사 첨삭

David, I apologize for what happened last night. Actually, I didn’t go to work yesterday. I was not feeling well because of the vaccine I got during my medical. I had been having fever and muscle pains since Sunday. The substitute teacher must have forgotten about  it. I am really sorry. I’m very much fine now so we can talk tonight. I can’t wait to talk with you! -- Jenny --   Dear [Name] >>Correct.How was your trip? >>Correct.Last night, I waited for your call at my home, but the bell didn't ring. >>Correct.  I noticed there was abscent rings three times at my office phone window. >>I  noticed there were three missed calls at my office phone window.  I am sure that you forgot promising to call to my home when it dosn'response with me. >>I am sure that you forgot about calling my home when I don’t answer in my office.Bye. >>Correct.          

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