Dear [Name]

Hi [이름]! ^^

Thank you for spending time writing your composition. I searched Inca and indeed it is a really amazing place.^^

Do your best to go there with your family.^^ Me too, I will.

About your fear in speaking English, I understand, let\'s take it easy and slowly but surely that you are improving not only your confidence but also your skill.^^

Have a peaceful sleep [이름].

-T. Naomi

Dear [Name],

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I am still afraid of speaking English.

>>I am still afraid of speaking in English.
Do you know this phenomenon in me ?

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I think the reason of the this, the word order of Korean is different with English.

>>I think the reason of this is the word order in Korean structure is different with English.

Anyway, Inca is located in Peru.

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I want to go to there with my family and feel their civillization.

>>correct: spelling check: civilization

I don\'t know why, when I like there exactly, but Inca must be amazing place.
>>I don\'t know why and when I like there exactly, but Inca must be an amazing place.


Good night.

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Thank you.

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