Dear [Name]

I was waiting for your message eagerly yesterday. Don't take that so serious. ^^ I'm also a kind of person who is likely to forget to do something several times in a day. Today, we talked about nation's the worst ferry disaster, leaving hundreds of innocent students under the cold water. It's already been about 2 weeks but there are still more than hundreds students unaccounted for after the maritime disaster. Not only SSU(Ship Salvage Unit) but also many civilian divers are desperately struggling to find bodies. We all Koreans are infuriated a lot because the captain didn't take appropriate actions except for escaping from his ship, saying that "Just stay in a cabin, don't move", which is reportedly main cause of massive casualty. You know what? Chelsea, I don't know anyone who was on the board in person but I was really heartbroken when I first heard the news. Besides me, all the Korean people feel the same way. They are still young students. They hasn't achieved their own dream. The only thing they did wrong was they just followed what captain asked to do well like they were taught before. As an adult, I'm very shameful. So many people were heading for the group memorial alter to condolence last weekend. The line of people won't be disappear easily for now I guess. All the festivals local governments planed to hold were all canceled. All the entertainment T.V shows are also called off. Oh, Chelsea, sorry to tell you about a sad story. Have a nice day. I'll be staying same time, same place, waiting for you. Bye.

Good Morning Mr. [이름]!! Yes, it is a very sad story because most of the victims were students and yes they are very young and they could have done a lot of thing in their lives. It\'s really sad that the captain abandoned his ship. I don\'t have any words to describe the captain\'s action. I hope that they will be able to find all the bodies. The  least thing Korean people could do is to find the bodies and give them a proper burial. Anyway, I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet all your points. See you later! ~T.Chelsea I was waiting for your message eagerly yesterday. >> CORRECT^^ Don\'t take that so serious. ^^ >> CORRECT^^ I\'m also a kind of person who is likely to forget to do something several times in a day. >> CORRECT^^ Today, we talked about nation\'s the worst ferry disaster, leaving hundreds of innocent students under the cold water. >> Today, we talked the nation\'s worst ferry disaster, leaving hundreds of innocent student under the cold water. It\'s already been about 2 weeks but there are still more than hundreds students unaccounted for after the maritime disaster. >> It has been about 2 weeks now but there are still more than hundreds students unaccounted after the martime disaster. Not only SSU(Ship Salvage Unit) but also many civilian divers are desperately struggling to find bodies. >> Not only SSU (Ship Salvage Unit) but also many civilian divers are desperately struggling to find the bodies. We all Koreans are infuriated a lot because the captain didn\'t take appropriate actions except for escaping from his ship, saying that \"Just stay in a cabin, don\'t move\", which is reportedly main cause of massive casualty. >> We Koreans are infuriated a lot because the captain didn\'t take appropriate actions except for escaping from his ship, he said that they should stay in the cabin, and don\'t move, which was reported to be the main cause of massive cassualty. You know what? Chelsea, I don\'t know anyone who was on the board in person but I was really heartbroken when I first heard the news. >> You know what Chelsea, I don\'t know anyone who was on the board personall but I was really heartbroken when I first heard the news. Besides me, all the Korean people feel the same way. >> Aside from me, all Koreans feel the same way. They are still young students. >> CORRECT^^ They hasn\'t achieved their own dream. >> They haven\'t achieved their own dreams. The only thing they did wrong was they just followed what captain asked to do well like they were taught before. >> The only thing they did wrong was they followed what the captain asked them to do like they were taught before. As an adult, I\'m very shameful. >> As an adult, I\'m very embarrased. So many people were heading for the group memorial alter to condolence last weekend. >> So many people were heading for the mass memorial alter last weekend. The line of people won\'t be disappear easily for now I guess. >> The ling of people won\'t be disappearing easily now I guess. All the festivals local governments planed to hold were all canceled. >> All the festivals that was planned by the government was cancelled. All the entertainment T.V shows are also called off. >> All the entertainment T.V shows was also put on hold. Oh, Chelsea, sorry to tell you about a sad story. >> CORRECT^^ Have a nice day. >> CORRECT^^ I\'ll be staying same time, same place, waiting for you. Bye. >> I\'ll be staying in the same place, same time waiting for you. Bye!