Dear [Name]

다음 메일 읽기 It's already hump day, huh? Time flies like an arrow. May 5th is Children's Day in Korea. My dad texted me this afternoon, saying that "I sent 0.2 millions Won(equivalent to 200 U.S dollars)". "You're still little kid for me". "I'm so sorry for not having given you a lot". However that's totally different from what he said. He's always tried to put our family before himself. He has devoted himself to doing whatever I want. As you know, I'm going to marry in a month. I've struggled for finding my way until a recent date. When I was twenties, I couldn't get used to studying my first major, electronics. I used to waste whole my twenties getting hooked on booze and women. Even if I failed to settle in my daily life, my dad always trusted me. Fortunately, I got to know how to enjoy English. Right after I graduated from my university, I seriously wanted to study more about English. At that time, I was teaching English in a private academy as a part time job, being in charge of elementary school students and middle school students. I wasn't young at all to begin another bachelor's degree. However my dad encouraged me to apply for English literature major department at Korea's National Open University(KNOU), which is the biggest University in Korea and mostly those who are engaged in their own job for a living are trying to study in order to make up for what they hadn't studied because of many various reasons. I finally graduated for my second university majoring in English literature in February, this year. Now I work for one of the biggest private academies in Wonju, Gangwon Province. It's all thanks to him, my dad. I'm very sorry to think how heavy burden he has felt since I was born. I'm very sad he still thinks he should have done something more to me. Now it's time to compensate what I've been given by him. Chelsea, thank you for reading my message. Have a nice day. See you tomorrow morning.

Rise and Shine Mr. [이름]^^ Thank you for sharing your story^^ I love reading your letters! You know what Mr. [이름], you are very lucky to have a great father who loves you so much. A lot of people wish to have a father like yours. Your father is great! He loves you so much! If he still thinks he should have done something more to you, I think you should talk to him. Tell him how greatful you are on everything he has done to you^^ I envy you for having a great father! You\'re blessed Mr. [이름]^^ Anyway, I made some corrections and I hope I was able to meet your points! See you later ~T.Chelsea 다음 메일 읽기  It\'s already hump day, huh? >> IT\'S already a humo day huh? Time flies like an arrow. >> CORRECT^^ May 5th is Children\'s Day in Korea. >> CORRECT^^ My dad texted me this afternoon, saying that \"I sent 0.2 millions Won(equivalent to 200 U.S dollars)\". >> My dad texted me this afternoon telling me that he sent me 0.2 million won (equivalent to 200 US. dollars). \"You\'re still little kid for me\". >> CORRECT^^  \"I\'m so sorry for not having given you a lot\".>> \"I\'m sorry for not giving you a lot.\"  However that\'s totally different from what he said. >> However, that\'s totally different from what he said. He\'s always tried to put our family before himself. >> He always try to put our family before himelf. He has devoted himself to doing whatever I want. >> He is devoted to do everything I want. As you know, I\'m going to marry in a month. >> As you know, I\'m going to get married in a month. I\'ve struggled for finding my way until a recent date. >> I\'m still struggling finding my way until the recent date. When I was twenties, I couldn\'t get used to studying my first major, electronics. >> When I was in my twenties, I couldn\'t get used to studying my first major which is electronics. I used to waste whole my twenties getting hooked on booze and women. >> I wated my whole twenties in getting hooked up with women and booze. Even if I failed to settle in my daily life, my dad always trusted me. >> Even if I failed in my life, my dad always trusted me. Fortunately, I got to know how to enjoy English. >> CORRECT^^ Right after I graduated from my university, I seriously wanted to study more about English. >> CORRECT! At that time, I was teaching English in a private academy as a part time job, being in charge of elementary school students and middle school students. >> At that time, I was teaching English in a private academy as a part time job and I was in-charge of elementary school students and middle school students. I wasn\'t young at all to begin another bachelor\'s degree. >> I was not young anymore to start another bachelor\'s degree. However my dad encouraged me to apply for English literature major department at Korea\'s National Open University(KNOU), which is the biggest University in Korea and mostly those who are engaged in their own job for a living are trying to study in order to make up for what they hadn\'t studied because of many various reasons. >> However, my dad encouraged me to apply for English literature major at Korea\'s National Open University (KNOU), which is the the biggest University in Korea and mostly, those who are engaged in their own job for a living are trying to study there in order to make up for what they hadn\'t studied because of many various reasons. I finally graduated for my second university majoring in English literature in February, this year. >> I finally graduated from my second university majoring in English Literature last February of this year. Now I work for one of the biggest private academies in Wonju, Gangwon Province. >> CORRECT^^ It\'s all thanks to him, my dad. >> CORRECT^^ >> I\'m thankful to my dad.  I\'m very sorry to think how heavy burden he has felt since I was born. >> I\'m feel so sorry when I think how I was a burden to him since I was born. I\'m very sad he still thinks he should have done something more to me. >> CORRECT^^ Now it\'s time to compensate what I\'ve been given by him. >> correct^^ Chelsea, thank you for reading my message. >> CORRECT^^ Have a nice day. See you tomorrow morning. >> CORRECT^^