Dear [Name],

2014-12-23 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Dear [Name], Good morning, Klein, How are you feeling today? I have joined a meeting for NBi project with Indian engineer yesterday. We have discussed reduction for R&D cost. If awarded this project then we will support R&D tasks(make a Technical document/Simulation/Design/management with our customer) to Indian side. Because NBi project responsibility is [이름]dai Korea side. So, we should doing R&D tasks with our customer. But we need to many engineering cost and it’s should payment by Indian side. Indian side have a reduction cost solution, they want to do design work during finished project because Indian engineering cost is lower than Korea side. But Indian side can not finished design with our customer. Our customer have a short time for development compared to other customer and different a culture. Maybe we will doing All R&D tasks by Korea side. * Today I will join a Technical presentation for NBi with our customer. The presentation will start 2:30p.m~ thank you.

강사 첨삭

What a wonderful day and a wonderful composition from you Rich! Thank you for dropping by! Now, I feel even happier than a while ago. I bet you are going to be busy again, as always. Just take it easy my friend. I hope you can go home early, so you can have a good rest. Stay safe and warm! Best of luck at work!!! _Klein Dear [Name],Good morning, Klein,How are you feeling today?>>CorrectI have joined a meeting for NBi project with Indian engineer yesterday. >>I have joined a meeting for NBi Project with an Indian engineer yesterday. We have discussed reduction for R&D cost. >>CorrectIf awarded this project then we will support R&D tasks(make a Technical document/Simulation/Design/management with our customer) to Indian side.>>If granted, we will support the R&D tasks for our Indian customer such as making a Technical Document, Simulation and Design, and management with our customer. Because NBi project responsibility is [이름]dai Korea side. So, we should doing R&D tasks with our customer. >>Since [이름]dai Korea is responsible for NBi Project, we should be doing the R&D tasks with our customer. But we need to many engineering cost and it’s should payment by Indian side. >>But we need much engineering cost and we should get the payment from the Indians.Indian side have a reduction cost solution, they want to do design work during finished project because Indian engineering cost is lower than Korea side. But Indian side can not finished design with our customer. >>The Indians, having a reduction cost solution, want to do the design work when we finish the project because Indian engineering cost is lower than Korean. Our customer have a short time for development compared to other customer and different a culture. >>Our customer has a short time for development compared with other customers with different cultures.Maybe we will doing All R&D tasks by Korea side. >>Maybe we will be doing all R&D tasks in Korea.* Today I will join a Technical presentation for NBi with our customer. >>Correct! The presentation will start 2:30p.m~ >>The presentation will start at 2:30 p.m. thank you. >>Correct

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