Dear [Name]

2011-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

학생이 쓴 원문

Verna, thank you so much for your comment. I haven't checked it up for a long time, but I always find that it is so helpful for me. Last weekend, after finishing my presentation, I went out with my husband and had a good time, refreshing ourselves and having fun. Now, it's another week and new start for another job. Have a great day!

강사 첨삭

Hi there!

I'm glad to know that you take time to read my comments and they help you in a way.

Good Luck for this week!

~teacher Verna

Verna, thank you so much for your comment.

>>CORRECT J

I haven't checked it up for a long time, but I always find that it is so helpful for me.

>>I haven뭪 checked it out for a long time, but I always find it so helpful for me.
Last weekend, after finishing my presentation, I went out with my husband and had a good time, refreshing ourselves and having fun.

>>Last weekend, after finishing my presentation, I went out with my husband and had a good time. We were able to refresh ourselves and had fun.

Now, it's another week and new start for another job.

>>Now, it뭩 another week and a new start for another job.

Have a great day!

>>CORRECT J

 

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