Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
Thank you for your concern on my dad's health. I hope your mom be well soon.
Though it is mother-father's day today, our family members will be together next Sat. because my dad is still suffering from his wound and my mom is so tired.
I bought for my mom a set of table mats which is so pretty. The present for my dad will be prepared by my brother who I said is a good guy. :)
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름],
I'm happy to receive another composition from you. I also thank you for your concern and prayers for my Mom. You are a very good person. I will keep on praying for your Dad. Take care! See you later!
-Verna-
Thank you for your concern on my dad's health.
>>Correct
I hope your mom be well soon.
>> I hope your mom will get well soon.
Though it is mother-father's day today, our family members will be together next Sat. because my dad is still suffering from his wound and my mom is so tired. >> Though it is mother-father's day today, our family members will be together next Saturday because my dad is still suffering from his wound and my mom is so tired. I bought for my mom a set of table mats which is so pretty.
>> I bought my mom a set of table mats which are so pretty.
The present for my dad will be prepared by my brother who I said is a good guy. :)
>> The present for my dad will be prepared by my brother who I said he is a good guy. :)
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