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2016-06-22 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

Good to see you again, Lynn. I hope you get well sooner or later. We talked about management conflict of Lotte group. I don't know much about the whole story but as far as I know, older brother claims that control of the company should be his as his dad says. Younger brother, however, insists that his dad is too old to judge right decision. What's more, I have developed this group quite well. All the shareholders and board of directors want me to control this group just the way it is. As you mentioned, it's like Korean drama, isn't it? Speaking of drama, you must enjoy Korean drama. I just want to know what Korean drama you watch these days or what drama was the best you've ever watched. Anyway, do as the doctor said and you will be up and around. Take care. See you tomorrow morning.

강사 첨삭


Dear [이름],

Good to see you again too, [이름]. Thank you for the concern. Right now, I\'m not watching any Korean drama but I watch other Korean TV shows like Running Man, 2days One night, Real Men, Radio Star and others. What\'s  the best I\'ve watched so far? Hmm... I couldn\'t answer that because I like a lot of dramas. How about you? Do you also watch TV dramas with your wife? Do tell me about it tomorrow! See you!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

 

Good to see you again, Lynn. I hope you get well sooner or later.

>>correct!
We talked about management conflict of Lotte group.

>>we talked about the management conflict of the Lotte group.

I don\'t know much about the whole story but as far as I know, the older brother claims that control of the company should be his as his dad says.

>>correct!

Younger brother, however, insists that his dad is too old to judge right decision.

>> The younger brother, however insists that his dad is too old to judge which is the right decision.

What\'s more, I have developed this group quite well.

>> Furthermore, he developed the company under his management.

All the shareholders and board of directors want me to control this group just the way it is.

>> correct!

OR>> All the shareholders and board of directors want me to control this group just the way it is. (INDIRECT)

As you mentioned, it\'s like a Korean drama, isn\'t it?
>> correct!

OR>> As you said, it\'s like a Korean drama, isn\'t it?
Speaking of drama, you must enjoy Korean drama.

>> Speaking of dramas, you must enjoy watching Korean dramas.

I just want to know what Korean drama you watch these days or what drama was the best you\'ve ever watched.
>>correct!
Anyway, do as the doctor said and you will be up and around.

>>correct!

Take care. See you tomorrow morning.

>>correct!

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