Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
A blessed Thursday to you!
It often happen to me before. I am reading a novel and it was interesting so I want to finish it. I keep on reading and when I finished the novel it\'s already 6 or 7 in the morning. I was really surprise because when I started reading it was really dark and when I look out the window again it was really bright. Maybe that\'s what happened to you. See you later!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
Hey Lynn. Happy hump day~!!
>>correct!
I went to bed late again last night.
>>correct!
You know what? Finishing my work, I took a shower and read a book lying on sofa.
>>You know what? After finishing my work, I took a shower and read a book lying on the sofa.
I just dozed off for a minute.
>>correct!
After that, I never fall asleep again until 5 a.m. You always wake me up every morning. ^^
>>correct!
As young kids are getting older, they get more and more knowledge but sometimes I think that kinds of education rather makes them stupid, less creative, less emotional especially here in Korea.
>>As young kids are getting older, they get more and more knowledge but sometimes I think that kind of education makes them stupid, less creative, less emotional especially here in Korea.
We no longer appreciate everyday lives and everything trivial.
>>We no longer appreciate everyday life and everything trivial.
We only focus on special events such as traveling around touristy attractions.
>>We only focus on special events such as traveling around tourist attractions.
However, every stuff around us is worth enjoying. All we have to do is just change our perspective.
>>correct!
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