Dear [Name]

2017-06-01 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, there How are you? You looked got a cold again yesterday. Hope you be well. Talking about our marriage, I felt lots of memories. Hurting words, behaviors, and facial expressions to the loved ones... Maybe it was because we married so late that each of us already had established one's own lifestyle. For instance, my hubby still goes to bed very late - usually after 3am and takes a nap during daytime, which makes him get fatter and fatter. In my case, I can't endure his trying to give advises on my job and even his long speech on anything he'd like to mention. He's hilarious and fun, but talkative and emotional. In many areas, I'm more knowledgeable than him - yes, this is what I think, but I guess his opinion would be different. :) Actually, he was so sensitive of my words and acts with feeling of wariness of my ignoring him. All couples have problems, small or big, but having someone who cares about you and sacrifices for you is such a wonderful thing. You can have one, too.:)

강사 첨삭


Good day Miss [이름]!
Thank you so much for sending in your composition today.

That really made my day...

Hopefully someday I can also experience those things you have mentioned. Really excited to have one..and yes I am still hopeful that I can meet him someday...

I have learne a lot from your stories Miss [이름], I really enjoyed it thank you so much.

I can\'t wait to hear your voice again...

Take care and have a good day!

xoxoTeacher Cam^^ 


Hi, there
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How are you?

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You looked got a cold again yesterday.

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Hope you be well. 

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Talking about our marriage, I felt lots of memories.

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Hurting words, behaviors, and facial expressions to the loved ones...

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Maybe it was because we married so late that each of us already had established one\'s own lifestyle.

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For instance, my hubby still goes to bed very late - usually after 3am and takes a nap during daytime, which makes him get fatter and fatter.

>>correct

In my case, I can\'t endure his trying to give advises on my job and even his long speech on anything he\'d like to mention.

>>correct

He\'s hilarious and fun, but talkative and emotional.

>>correct

In many areas, I\'m more knowledgeable than him - yes, this is what I think, but I guess his opinion would be different. :)

>>correct
Actually, he was so sensitive of my words and acts with feeling of wariness of me ignoring him. 

>>correct
All couples have problems, small or big, but having someone who cares about you and sacrifices for you is such a wonderful thing.

>>correct

You can have one, too.:)

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