Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good day Miss [이름]!
Thank you so much for sending in your composition today.
That really made my day...
Hopefully someday I can also experience those things you have mentioned. Really excited to have one..and yes I am still hopeful that I can meet him someday...
I have learne a lot from your stories Miss [이름], I really enjoyed it thank you so much.
I can\'t wait to hear your voice again...
Take care and have a good day!
xoxoTeacher Cam^^
Hi, there
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How are you?
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You looked got a cold again yesterday.
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Hope you be well.
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Talking about our marriage, I felt lots of memories.
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Hurting words, behaviors, and facial expressions to the loved ones...
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Maybe it was because we married so late that each of us already had established one\'s own lifestyle.
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For instance, my hubby still goes to bed very late - usually after 3am and takes a nap during daytime, which makes him get fatter and fatter.
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In my case, I can\'t endure his trying to give advises on my job and even his long speech on anything he\'d like to mention.
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He\'s hilarious and fun, but talkative and emotional.
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In many areas, I\'m more knowledgeable than him - yes, this is what I think, but I guess his opinion would be different. :)
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Actually, he was so sensitive of my words and acts with feeling of wariness of me ignoring him.
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All couples have problems, small or big, but having someone who cares about you and sacrifices for you is such a wonderful thing.
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You can have one, too.:)
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