Dear [Name]
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
You didn\'t seem sleepy during the class earlier. ^^
I hope you\'ll be able to sleep well tonight.
Enjoy watching baseball on Saturday!
Tell me about it on Tuesday. ^^
Have a good night!
_Teacher Dianne ^__^
Hi, How have you been?
>> correct (I\'m doing good. ^^)
Here in Korea it is cold in the morning and in the evening.
>> correct
>> or: It\'s cold in the morning and evening here in Korea.
I don\'t like this weahther.
>> I don\'t like this weather. (be careful with spelling)
The weather is easy to caught a cold.But in the afternoon it is still hot.
>> The weather is easy to catch a cold, but it is still hot in the afternoon.
I am wearing a jacket not to catch a cold.
>> correct
In the evening, I can\'t sleep well because of the mosquitoes.So,I am sleepy now.
>> In the evening, I can\'t sleep well because of the mosquitoes, so, I am sleepy now.
>> Or: I couldn\'t sleep last night because of mosquitoes, so I am sleepy now.
On Saturday I am going to go to the baseball stadium with my father.
>> On Saturday, I am going to the baseball stadium with my father.
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