Dear [Name].
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jane!
Thank you for having the time to do your homework. ^^
We\'re lucky now because there are GPS applications to use.
We can easily find directions unlike before.
Have a good weekend as well and take care. ^_^
_Teacher Dianne
Hi, teacher.
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This is my homework today.
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What would you do if you got lost in an unfamiliar city? Did this situation happen to you before?
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- I was Hongkong last weekend for a trip with my mom and my sister.
>> I was in Hong Kong last weekend for a trip with my mom and my sister.
There I lost several time. But in these days, google map is very intelligent so I search the road with google map.
>> There, I lost several times. But in these days, Google map is very intelligent or accurate, so I searched the road with Google map.
And I also asked to local people.
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I always think that English is very important to every where especially unfamiliar city..
>> I always think that English is very important to every where, especially to an unfamiliar city.
That why I learn English hard.
>> That\'s why I\'m learning English hard.
And I think even though I don\'t fully understand, but I think body language works.
>> And I think even though I don\'t fully understand it, I think body language works.
Have a good weekend teacher!
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