Dear [Name].

2018-12-14 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi, Teacher! I'm sorry I couldn't pick up the phone this morning. I came back by home at 5 am today. Until that time I drunk with my old friends. So I feel like I'm in hell now... My answer for today's question is yesterday. I would like to change yesterday because I drunk too much... I should stop drinking but It's not easy.. Take care!

강사 첨삭

Hi, Jane!


I was actually thinking that you might be drunk again. hahaha (peace)

Well, it\'s okay and I understand that.

You only have a rare chance to meet and bond with your old friends.

Enjoy the rest of the day and also your weekend!


_Teacher Dianne


Hi, Teacher!

>> correct
 I\'m sorry I couldn\'t pick up the phone this morning.

>> correct
 I came back by home at 5 am today.

>> correct
 Until that time I drunk with my old friends.

>> Until that time I was drinking with my old friends.
 So I feel like I\'m in hell now...

>> correct
 My answer for today\'s question is yesterday.

>> correct
 I would like to change yesterday because I drunk too much...

>> I would like to change yesterday because I drank too much.

 I should stop drinking but it\'s not easy..
>> correct
Take care!

>> correct 

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