Dear [Name]!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Good afternoon!
My name is [이름] Kim.
Mt.Halla was covered with a lot of snow and snow flowers.
I want show you that fantastic scene.
If you have a chance, make sure to go there.
I bet you\'ll definitely like it!
Thank you for always teaching me interestingly.
Have a good weekend!
Sincerely yours
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! This is [Name]. Wow!! I was surprised! I love your picture. Thank you so much. Salamat!
How I wish I could experience snow but there is no winter in the Philippines. Hehehe...
And I hope I could visit Korea too in winter. In the Philippines, we don\'t need visa to go directly to Jeju Island.
I like to go there and see you. ^^
Thank you also for being so kind and friendly.
~~May~~
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