Dear [Name]

2019-04-11 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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Hello, good evening! I wonder did you spend nice day. I write this message to tell you that I can\'t receive your call today due to my sickness. I got a cold last night so I can\'t speak anything. I\'m so sorry. I hope to see you tomorrow. Take care!

강사 첨삭

Hi, Su [이름]!

Good evening too. It has been a nice day for me and I\'m doing well.

I appreciate you for sending me a message about your condition.

I\'m sad to hear that you\'re sick. :(

I hope that you\'ll get better soon. Take your medicines, drink lots of water and take a good rest.

I also hope to see you tomorrow.

Always take care. :)

~Teacher Gina

Hello, good evening! I wonder did you spend nice day.
I write this message to tell you that I can\'t receive your call today due to my sickness.
I got a cold last night so I can\'t speak anything. I\'m so sorry. I hope to see you tomorrow.
Take care!

>> Hello, good evening! I wonder if you did spend a nice day.

I wrote this message to tell you that I can\'t receive your call today due to my sickness.

I got a cold last night so I can\'t speak anything. I\'m so sorry. I hope to see you tomorrow.
Take care!

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