Dear [Name]!

2010-03-29 · 첨삭 강사 JADE

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Hello, Teacher :D Did you have a great weekend? I received lots of congratulations. Some friends visited me completely out of the blue with a cake !!! (So, I ate 3 cakes!!! haha) It was the emotional zenith of my birthday events. However I wasn't able to continue enjoying my birthday. I saw some sad news on a news show. If I can, I will try to explain about that in our class. Bye♥

강사 첨삭

Cheska, So glad to hear of your very happy celebration. I think I already know about the bad news…….I think, there’s actually 2 bad news over the weekend. Lets talk about it later….. Hello, Teacher :DDid you have a great weekend? >>Correct I received lots of congratulations. >>A lot of people greeted me on my birthday. Some friends visited me completely out of the blue with a cake !!! >>Some friends came on a surprise visit with a cake. (“out of the blue” means “out no where” not unless you really meant you didn’t know where they came from and probably haven’t seen them for a while )(So, I ate 3 cakes!!! haha) >>correct It was the emotional zenith of my birthday events. >>This birthday, it felt like the zenith of my emotions. >>It was the most emotional birthday I have ever had. However I wasn't able to continue enjoying my birthday. >>correct I saw some sad news on a news show. >>I saw some sad news on TV. If I can, I will try to explain about that in our class. Bye♥ >>Correct

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