Dear [Name]!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher :D
Did you have a great weekend? I received lots of congratulations.
Some friends visited me completely out of the blue with a cake !!!
(So, I ate 3 cakes!!! haha)
It was the emotional zenith of my birthday events.
However I wasn't able to continue enjoying my birthday. I saw some sad news on a news show. If I can, I will try to explain about that in our class. Bye♥
강사 첨삭
Cheska,
So glad to hear of your very happy celebration.
I think I already know about the bad news…….I think, there’s actually 2 bad news over the weekend. Lets talk about it later…..
Hello, Teacher :DDid you have a great weekend?
>>Correct
I received lots of congratulations.
>>A lot of people greeted me on my birthday. Some friends visited me completely out of the blue with a cake !!!
>>Some friends came on a surprise visit with a cake.
(“out of the blue” means “out no where” not unless you really meant you didn’t know where they came from and probably haven’t seen them for a while )(So, I ate 3 cakes!!! haha)
>>correct It was the emotional zenith of my birthday events.
>>This birthday, it felt like the zenith of my emotions.
>>It was the most emotional birthday I have ever had. However I wasn't able to continue enjoying my birthday.
>>correct
I saw some sad news on a news show.
>>I saw some sad news on TV.
If I can, I will try to explain about that in our class. Bye♥
>>Correct
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