Dear [Name]
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I've read the article about the 'new Da Vinci code' of Mona Lisa. It says a scholar found several animals like lion in the painting tilted 90 degree to the right. The scholar said that his theory was based on the note made by Leonardo himself.
However, I highly suspect that we can find the animal image as he found and that Mona Lisa could be interpreted as 'envy of God' since lion is a symbol of envy.
I'm sorry I couldn't concentrate on our topic, I was so interested in it, though. So tired this morning because of the drinking last night at the business(?) meeting. :)
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Good morning once again Ms. [이름]! ^^ No worries about today\'s class. I almost didn\'t even notice that you were tired at all because you were still able to give relevant and professional opinions. It truly is an interesting topic. Because of that news, I downloaded the other book of Dan Brown entitled \"The Lost Symbol\" just a while ago. I will be reading that later.
Sometimes you surprise me with your vast vocabulary and how well you can use them in your sentences. I applaud you for your very commendable skills. ^^
I\'ve read the article about the \'new Da Vinci code\' of Mona Lisa.
>>Correct!
It says a scholar found several animals like lion in the painting tilted 90 degree to the right.
>>It says a scholar found several animals like a lion in the painting tilted 90 degrees to the right.
The scholar said that his theory was based on the note made by Leonardo himself. >>Correct!However, I highly suspect that we can find the animal image as he found and that Mona Lisa could be interpreted as \'envy of God\' since lion is a symbol of envy. >>Correct!I\'m sorry I couldn\'t concentrate on our topic, I was so interested in it, though.
>>Correct!
So tired this morning because of the drinking last night at the business(?) meeting. :)
>>Correct!
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