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2011-12-21 · 첨삭 강사 Aurora

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Hi, there. I'm taking a short trip tomorrow and the day after. Hope to see you this Friday. TV and other medias talk about Kim, Jeong-Il's death all day long. Yes, it is such a huge issue, but my husband suspects that they're covering domestic issues by the news about Kim;s death. I'm not so sure, but it is also true we have a lot of political issues now. :)

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for sending a nice composition. I know it\'s really a big issue about his death. Let\'s just wait and see. See you on Friday! Have a nice day! Teacher Aurora   Here are my corrections:   Hi, there. >> Hi, there!I\'m taking a short trip tomorrow and the day after. >> Correct Hope to see you this Friday. >> I hope to see you this Friday. TV and other medias talk about Kim, Jeong-Il\'s death all day long. >> Medias talked about Kim Jeong-Il\'s death all day long. Yes, it is such a huge issue, but my husband suspects that they\'re covering domestic issues by the news about Kim;s death. >> Yes, it is such a huge issue but my husband suspects that they\'re covering domestic issues by the news about Kim\'s death.  I\'m not so sure, but it is also true we have a lot of political issues now. :) >> I\'m not so sure but it is also true, we have a lot of political issues now. :)  

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