Dear [Name], How are you?

It’s a nice day. It’s a first composition for you. Okay, I’d like to tell you yesterday’s happening. Yesterday, as I told you, I went to the Chinese Embassy after our school in order to make VISA. I had a class which starts at 10:15. Therefore I had to arrive at the Embassy at least by 9 AM in order to attend the class on time. And to do that, I had to leave home at 8 AM. Yesterday I got up late so I couldn’t leave soon after our class. I needed time to get ready to go out. Eventually I was quiet late, I mean about 40 minutes. To make matter worse, I forgot a certification paper of a hotel and an air ticket for field trip. I was so stupid. I'm sorry that this space is not sufficent to fininsh my composition. I'll continue this on another composition.

Hi [이름]! Thank you for writing a composition for me to read and check. I hope you will continue to write and I hope you will be more open with your ideas in writing a composition. Jane   It's a nice day >> correct It's a first composition for you >> It's the first composition for you. Okay, I'd like to tell you yesterday's happening >> Okay, I'd like to tell you what happened yesterday. Yesterday, as I told you, I went to the Chinese Embassy after our school in order to make VISA >> Yesterday, just like what I told you, I went to the Chinese Embassy after our class in order to get a VISA. I had a class which starts at 10:15. >> I had a class at 10:15. Therefore I had to arrive at the Embassy at least by 9am in order to attend the class on time. >> Therefore, I had to arrive at the Embassy by 9am so as not to be late for my class. And to do that, I had to leave home at 8am. >> correct Yesterday I got up so late so I couldn't leave soon after our class. >> correct I needed time to get ready to go out. >> correct Eventually I was quiet late, I mean about 40 minutes >> Eventually, I was late for about 40 minutes To make matter worse, I forgot a certification paper of a hotel and an air ticket for field trip >> To make matters worse I forgot the certification paper of the hotel and the airplane ticket for the field trip. I was so stupid. >> correct I'm sorry that this space is not sufficient to finish my composition. >> I feel sorry that the space is not sufficient for my composition. I'll continue this on another composition. >> correct