Dear [Name], How are your holidays?

2014-05-07 · 첨삭 강사 Chelsea

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I go to work even on Children's Day, which is a national holiday in my country. My government is trying to make people take some days off frequently so that people spend more money on leisure and sightseeing, which eventually can lead to economic growth. For example, lawmakers proposed new bill so called 'Substitute Holidays'. In case that national holiday is on Sunday or Saturday, we can extend our holidays even in weekdays, such as Monday and Tuesday. Moreover, some people suggest 'Sandwich Holidays'. That means in case two holidays are placed every other day, we can also use the day between two holidays as a holiday. Those are all we are looking forward to. However, people who have to face so much tough competition in private sector like me cannot take advantage new policies about vacation. But it doesn't matter. I believe all the things I suffer from will be really good experience for my carrier and my life. I don't want to live just as ordinary people do.

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Hi there^^ Thank you for sending me your composition^^ Yeah, I think that\'s the disadvantage when you work in a private sector but anyways, you will be recieving a double pay, so I think it\'s still worth it! I agree with you! Those struggles and problems we are experiencing will be a good experience. We will learn a lot of lessons. I think, everything happens for a reason! Let\'s talk more about this in our class^^ See you later^^ ~T.Chelsea I go to work even on Children\'s Day, which is a national holiday in my country. >> I still need to go to work even though it\'s Children\'s day, which is a national holiday in my country. My government is trying to make people take some days off frequently so that people spend more money on leisure and sightseeing, which eventually can lead to economic growth. >> My government is trying to make peole take some days off frequently, so that people will be able to spend more money on leisure and sightseeing, which enventually will help the economy to grow. For example, lawmakers proposed new bill so called \'Substitute Holidays\'. >> For example, lawmakers proposed a new bill called \'Substitue Holidays\'. In case that national holiday is on Sunday or Saturday, we can extend our holidays even in weekdays, such as Monday and Tuesday. >> In case the national holiday is on Sunday or Saturday, we can extend our hoildays in weekdays, such as Monday and Tuesday. Moreover, some people suggest \'Sandwich Holidays\'. >> CORRECT^^ That means in case two holidays are placed every other day, we can also use the day between two holidays as a holiday. >> That means, in case two holidays are placed every other day, we can alos use the day between the two holidays as a holiday. Those are all we are looking forward to. >> Those are the things we all look forward to. However, people who have to face so much tough competition in private sector like me cannot take advantage new policies about vacation. >> However, people who work in a competitve private sector like me cannot take advantage of the new policies about vacation. But it doesn\'t matter. >> CORRECT^^ I believe all the things I suffer from will be really good experience for my carrier and my life. >> I believe all the struggles I\'m experiencing will be a really good experience for my career and my life. I don\'t want to live just as ordinary people do. >> I don\'t want to live just like ordinary people do.

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