Dear [Name], It’s getting colder.
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름].
I like parties too.Congratulations because you did organize the party. Hope you will have a great time.
- T.Verna -
Most people have several year-end parties at this time every year in Japan as Korea.
>> Most people have several year-end parties in Japan just like in Korea.
I also have two parties.
>>Correct.
One is a laboratory's party and the other is Korean Class's one which is relative to Korean Student Associate.
>> One is a laboratory's party and the other one is Korean Class' which is relative to Korean Student Associate.
I had to plan the latter.
>> I had to plan the later.
It is bothering me too much.
>> Correct.
I sent e-mail several times in order to arrange their schedule.
>> I sent e-mails several times already,in order to arrange their schedule.
After reservation of restaurant, I finally sent a confirming e-mail yesterday.
>> After having a reservation of the restaurant, I finally sent a confirmation e-mail yesterday.
But I received an e-mail from a chief of this group.
>> But I received an e-mail from the leader of this group.
that was she will contact me after she check. I was little bit upset.
>>That she will contact me after she check. I was little bit upset.
I thought it looks just quarrel because I already arranged and finished it.
>> I thought it looks to be a quarrel because I already arranged and finished it.
If she had any opinion, she should let me know her mind before I arranged it.
>> If she had any opinion, she should let me know,before I arranged it.
Anyway I talked to her and realized that she just wants to talk together whenever students do anything.
>> Anyway I talked to her and realized that she just want to talk with other students if they don뭪 have anything to do.
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