Dear [Name]. (my homework)

2017-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nova

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If you could time travel, where would you go? If i could time travel, i will go wherever you will go. At my 3 years old, at 10 years old and at low school. I love future, present. but, i don't forget at past that could time travel. Because that's what made me. thus, i will go there. it will be my future and my time to make my past. To go heaven untill... To heaven go untill... (my gibberish LOL..kkk;) have a good night! Nova! ;)

강사 첨삭

A pleasant evening to you [이름]! tank you for making your homework. As usual, please review the corrections. By the way please remember that the pronoun \"I\" is always capitalized (written in big letter). Good job!

~Teacher Nova

If i could time travel, i will go wherever you will go.

>> If I could time travel, I will go anywhere.

At my 3 years old, at 10 years old and at low school.

>> I would go back in time when I was three and ten years old. I would also like to go back to law school.

 I love future, present. but, i don\'t forget at past that could time travel.

>>  I love being at the present time, but I couldn\'t forget about the past.

thus, i will go there.

>> Thus, I would like to time travel .

 

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