Dear. RINA
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear. Rina
I hope doing well tonight. it was second time to talk each other.
That was amaging time but very very short time.kk i will miss your
voice for a weekend.T.T
Anyway,i'm preparing to transfer my company to my dream work
place. please help me to be succeful my hope. and i will sincerely
follow your rule. i think you would be a good and nice teacher and friend.. aren't you? kk
Today was so tired to me.. i'm gonna sleep soon..
see you later Rina..and good night~!
Super lovely [이름].
강사 첨삭
Dear. Rina
>>Correct sentence!!I hope doing well tonight.
>>I hope you're doing well tonight.
it was second time to talk each other.
>>It was our second time to talk to each other.That was amaging time but very very short time.kk
>> That was amazin time but very short time.
i will miss your voice for a weekend.T.T
>>I will miss your voice over the weekend.Anyway,i'm preparing to transfer my company to my dream work place.
>>anyway,I'm planning to transfer from my company to my dream job in a company
please help me to be succeful my hope.
Please help me to be successful about my hope.
and i will sincerely follow your rule.
>>Correct sentence.
i think you would be a good and nice teacher and friend.. aren't you? kk >>Correct sentence.Today was so tired to me.. i'm gonna sleep soon..
>>Today was so tiring for me.I뭢 gonna sleep soon.see you later Rina..and good night~! >>CorrectSuper lovely [이름].
>>Correct
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