Dear. RINA

2010-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 lina

학생이 쓴 원문

Dear. Rina I hope doing well tonight. it was second time to talk each other. That was amaging time but very very short time.kk i will miss your voice for a weekend.T.T Anyway,i'm preparing to transfer my company to my dream work place. please help me to be succeful my hope. and i will sincerely follow your rule. i think you would be a good and nice teacher and friend.. aren't you? kk Today was so tired to me.. i'm gonna sleep soon.. see you later Rina..and good night~! Super lovely [이름].

강사 첨삭

      Dear. Rina >>Correct sentence!!I hope doing well tonight. >>I hope you're doing well tonight. it was second time to talk each other. >>It was our second time to talk to each other.That was amaging time but very very short time.kk >> That was amazin time but very short time.  i will miss your voice for a weekend.T.T >>I will miss your voice over the weekend.Anyway,i'm preparing to transfer my company to my dream work place. >>anyway,I'm planning to transfer from my company to my dream job in a company  please help me to be succeful my hope. Please help me to be successful about my hope. and i will sincerely follow your rule. >>Correct sentence. i think you would be a good and nice teacher and friend.. aren't you? kk >>Correct sentence.Today was so tired to me.. i'm gonna sleep soon.. >>Today was so tiring for me.I뭢 gonna sleep soon.see you later Rina..and good night~! >>CorrectSuper lovely [이름]. >>Correct

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