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2018-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

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Dear teacher, Thank you for your teaching for today. I have two quesion what I have learned from you today. In the middle part of our recording file today, I told you that.... the temperature inside the van was 96 degree celuis. Then you told me that.... Oh!~ my god...4 degree for 4... it is already boiling its cool. => what does it mean? Another quesion is that in the middle part of our recording file, you told me...that "I hope that the van's driver and the teacher have should checked every corner of the van because that is .......child" => Please insert some word... Also, you told me that..... "I've must go on..and today we are going to discuss what"

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Thank you very much [이름]^^

I hope I answered your questions very well.

Dear teacher,
>>Dear Teacher, 

Thank you for your teaching for today.
>>CORRECT!
I have two quesion what I have learned from you today.
>>
I have two questions about what I have learned from you today. 
In the middle part of our recording file today, I told you that.... the temperature inside the van was 96 degree celuis.
>>
In the middle part of our recording file today, I told you that, \"The temperature inside the van was 96 degrees Celsius.\" 
Then you told me that.... Oh!~ my god...4 degree for 4... it is already boiling its cool. => what does it mean?
>>
Then you told me, \"Oh!~ my god...4 degrees only, and it is already the boiling point. => What does it mean? 
Another quesion is that in the middle part of our recording file,
>>
Another question is that in the middle part of our recording file.
you told me...that \"I hope that the van\'s driver and the teacher have should checked every corner of the van because that is .......child\" =>

>>You told me that, \"I hope that the van driver and the teacher should have checked every corner of the van because that it was a LITTLE child\"

Please insert some word.
>>CORRECT!
Also, you told me that..... \"I\'ve must go on..and today we are going to discuss what\"

>>Also, you told me that, \"Life must go on, and today we are going to discuss, what?\"

Like: What are we going to discuss?


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