Dear Teacher :)

2011-11-24 · 첨삭 강사 camille

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Hi~ I'm [이름]. first, I'm really sorry about my absence. As you know, I had been working hard. even I just slept for 2 hours. I think you can surely understand me. and, today I checked your comments about my class. It's really been a long time from last checking. lol Anyway, I'll study harder than before and try to follow your nice plan. thanks~! best regard [이름]

강사 첨삭

Hello there my dear [이름], Thank you so much for dropping in your composition. Im really sorry to hear that. Dont worry I totally understand you. I just want you to take a rest and relax..I know that youve been having a hard time working, please do take your time in taking a rest because that\'s what I really want you to do my dear..You need that.. I\'ll see you again tomorrow.And please do take care of yourself my dear.. T.Cam   Hi~I\'m [이름]. >>correct!first, I\'m really sorry about my absence.>>correct!As you know, I had been working hard. even I just slept for 2 hours.>>correct!I think you can surely understand me.>>correct!and, today I checked your comments about my class. >>correct!It\'s really been a long time from last checking. lol>>It\'s reallyy been a long time since the last time I checked it.Anyway, I\'ll study harder than before and try to follow your nice plan.>>correct!thanks~! >>correct!best regard[이름]

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