Dear teacher Dee
학생이 쓴 원문
Dear teacher Dee,
I am [이름]. Thank you for your teaching today.
I have a question. In the last part of today\'s class, I couldn\'t catch your sentence even if I repeated the recording files.
From 19:37 to 20:25, .... I told you that......... \"Based on these kinds of statistics, they have to explain about the positive effect on their bodies. It is very important thing.\" ....... From next sentence,.... I couldn\'t catch your sentence what you said.
Please write it down on this part.
So...that... the live up the elderly... was still be lent and...maybe they maybe contribute to the economic activity and they say...???
=> please correct these sentence.
Thank you!~
강사 첨삭
Hello Sir [이름]!
The exact words mentioned were: \"So that, the lives of the elderly will still be lengthened. They, maybe, still contribute to the economic activity, as they say.\"
Have a good day!
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