Dear Teacher Dianne.

Hi, Jane!

I think I know her. Is she from the comedy-variety show Family Outing?

I really admire her natural beauty even her skin color.

I and my friend like her because of her smile as well. ^^

Thank you for sharing about her.

_Teacher Dianne ^_^

Today\'s homework.

>> correct
 Describe a famous person, e.g. a singer or athlete, that you admire. What can you say about his or her appearance and personal traits. 

>> Describe a famous person, e.g. a singer or athlete, that you admire. What can you say about his or her appearance and personal traits?

 \"Lee Hyo-ri\" is my favorite female singer in korea.

>>  \"Lee Hyo-ri\" is my favorite female singer in Korea. (Grammatically correct. Capitalize the name of your country. ^^)
 She has beautiful smile. She has half moon smile.

>> She has a beautiful smile and a half moon smile.
 She is older than me so she\'s no longer young but I like her.

>> She is older than me, so she\'s no longer young, but I like her. (Grammatically correct, just put a comma before the conjunctions.)
 She love her figure as it is. She get any plastic surgeries.

>> She loves her figure as it is. She also didn\'t undergo any plastic surgeries.
 And also I like her life style. She is very famous but she live in small island with her husband.

>> And also, I like her lifestyle. She is very famous, but she lives in a small island with her husband.