Dear, teacher Iirah

Dear, Iirah I'm Jooyun Kim, and a master student. Actually I have graduated a university nine years ago. Then I have worked for a landscape design company as a landscape planner. But I hoped to study more about my major.So I came back school even though this university isn't same one. I'm studying urban engineering. This major is little bit different from landscape.But my professor's major is also landscape. For that I made up my mind to enter this university. I usually speak Japanese in a univ.. Though I can speak Japanese, I still need English speaking ability.Some lecturers give a lecture in English, and I have to presentation by English.These are the reasons why I try to learn English. And therefore I have to study hard. Have a nice day. Best regards, [이름]

Dear [Name],              All your efforts will give you a very nice reward in the future after you are done with your masters degree. Furthering your studies in Japan is a good idea because as you said Japan has excellent urban engineering structures. You can also experience a different culture that can make you the best.              Take care and have a wonderful day!   Sincerely yours, T. Lirah     Dear, Iirah >>Dear [Name],I'm Jooyun Kim, and a master student. Actually I have graduated a university nine years ago. >>I’m Jooyun Kim, and I’m taking up my masters degree. I have graduated from University nine years ago. Then I have worked for a landscape design company as a landscape planner. >>Correct. But I hoped to study more about my major.So I came back school even though this university isn't same one. >>I wanted to study more about my major so I went back to school, even if this university is not the same as my previous university.I'm studying urban engineering. >>Correct. This major is little bit different from landscape.But my professor's major is also landscape. >>This major is a little bit different from landscaping but surprisingly my professor’s major is also landscaping.For that I made up my mind to enter this university. >>Correct. >>For that reason I made up my mind to enter this university. (better) I usually speak Japanese in a univ.. >>I usually speak Japanese in the university. Though I can speak Japanese, I still need English speaking ability.Some lecturers give a lecture in English, and I have to presentation by English. >> Though I can speak Japanese, I still need English speaking ability because some lecturers give their lecture in English, and I have to do my presentations using English. These are the reasons why I try to learn English. And therefore I have to study hard. >> These are the reasons why I am trying to learn the English language, and therefore I have to study hard.Have a nice day. >>Correct.Best regards,Julie >>Correct.