Dear. teacher Kelly

2011-08-04 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi~! How are you,afternoon? Here is cloud for all day. I always thank you for your kindness and easy teaching to understand. You give me energy in the every morning at 6:50 AM(korea to the time). I'm feeling happy during talking about something. I heard the weather in the Philippines every day and you learn the culture. When first we met,we had a lot of thing in common so I was fun and surprised. We seemed to have become good frinds. We talk about the Typhoon, cosmetic surgery and drinking as soon as personal things, etc. I feel too short, say 10 minutes.^^; I hope to see you.I call every day, but I wonder you do not see. Be careful, always healthy. we're going well in the future. I'll see you tomorrow. Bye-Bye

강사 첨삭

Hello! You did a good job in writing this. It is always a pleasure talking to you every morning. You are very kind and delightful. I뭢 having a great afternoon. I hope you뭠l have a great one too. See you! T. Kelly Hi~! >>Hi!How are you,afternoon? >>How are you this afternoon?Here is cloud for all day. >>It has been cloudy here all day.I always thank you for your kindness and easy teaching to understand. >> I always thank you for your kindness and for teaching me lessons that are easy to understand.You give me energy in the every morning at 6:50 AM(korea to the time). >> You give me energy every morning at 6:50 AM(korea to the time).I'm feeling happy during talking about something. >> I'm feeling happy while talking about something.I heard the weather in the Philippines every day and you learn the culture. >> I hear about the weather in the Philippines every day and you learn about my culture.When first we met,we had a lot of thing in common so I was fun and surprised. >> When first we met,we had a lot of things in common so I was happy and surprised. We seemed to have become good frinds. >> We seemed to have become good friends.We talk about the Typhoon, cosmetic surgery and drinking as soon as personal things, etc. >> We talk about the Typhoon, cosmetic surgery and drinking as well as personal things, etc.I feel too short, say 10 minutes.^^; >> I feel that our 10 minute class is too short to say everything.^^;I hope to see you. >>Correct I call every day, but I wonder you do not see. >>We talk every day, but we don뭪 see each other.Be careful, always healthy. >>Be careful always and stay healthy.we're going well in the future. >>We뭠l stay good friends in the future.I'll see you tomorrow. >>Correct Bye-Bye >>Correct

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