Dear. teacher Kelly
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi~!
How are you,afternoon?
Here is cloud for all day.
I always thank you for your kindness and easy teaching to understand.
You give me energy in the every morning at 6:50 AM(korea to the time).
I'm feeling happy during talking about something.
I heard the weather in the Philippines every day and you learn the culture.
When first we met,we had a lot of thing in common so I was fun and surprised. We seemed to have become good frinds.
We talk about the Typhoon, cosmetic surgery and drinking as soon as personal things, etc.
I feel too short, say 10 minutes.^^;
I hope to see you.I call every day, but I wonder you do not see.
Be careful, always healthy.
we're going well in the future.
I'll see you tomorrow. Bye-Bye
강사 첨삭
Hello!
You did a good job in writing this. It is always a pleasure talking to you every morning. You are very kind and delightful. I뭢 having a great afternoon. I hope you뭠l have a great one too. See you!
T. Kelly
Hi~!
>>Hi!How are you,afternoon?
>>How are you this afternoon?Here is cloud for all day.
>>It has been cloudy here all day.I always thank you for your kindness and easy teaching to understand.
>> I always thank you for your kindness and for teaching me lessons that are easy to understand.You give me energy in the every morning at 6:50 AM(korea to the time).
>> You give me energy every morning at 6:50 AM(korea to the time).I'm feeling happy during talking about something.
>> I'm feeling happy while talking about something.I heard the weather in the Philippines every day and you learn the culture.
>> I hear about the weather in the Philippines every day and you learn about my culture.When first we met,we had a lot of thing in common so I was fun and surprised.
>> When first we met,we had a lot of things in common so I was happy and surprised.
We seemed to have become good frinds.
>> We seemed to have become good friends.We talk about the Typhoon, cosmetic surgery and drinking as soon as personal things, etc.
>> We talk about the Typhoon, cosmetic surgery and drinking as well as personal things, etc.I feel too short, say 10 minutes.^^;
>> I feel that our 10 minute class is too short to say everything.^^;I hope to see you.
>>Correct
I call every day, but I wonder you do not see.
>>We talk every day, but we don뭪 see each other.Be careful, always healthy.
>>Be careful always and stay healthy.we're going well in the future.
>>We뭠l stay good friends in the future.I'll see you tomorrow.
>>Correct
Bye-Bye
>>Correct
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