Dear teacher May
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Hi Sir [이름]! I hope that you could understand my explanations below.
Thank you for your kind clarifications. I am looking forward to speaking with you again tomorrow.
See you! ^^
~~May~~
I can hear on the rhythm.
>> I said \"I can hear (ahmm...) the rhythm.
>> Actually, when I am having a normal or informal English conversation with someone, I have this so-called \"mannerism\".
Mannerism means a particular way of speaking or moving that is hard to avoid. So, my mannerism is to say \"hmmm\" or \"ahmmm\" sometimes.
There are expressions that we always say when we speak. In your case, you also have it, if you notice yourself saying \"okay\" most of your sentences. ^^
when you are saying the rhythm, it is automatically mean about the music.
>> When you say \"rhythm\", it automatically means \"about the music\".
>> I\'m sorry if you didn\'t really catch that Sir [이름]. The word \"automatically\" in a sentence, without any thoughts, means by itself.
But when we try to rephrase it, it will be: \"I can hear the rhythm./I can hear the rhythm IN music.\",
not \"I can hear the rhythm OF music.\", because rhythm is music itself. It is the flow of the music.
she said about like.... just few minutes to walk going to Haundae.
>> She said about, like, just few minutes to walk going to the Haeundae beach.
>> Yes. This is a right expression. \"Like\" is used in different ways. It can be used as:
1. a preposition (Example: He looks like his father.)
2. a conjunction (Example: She looked like she was about to cry.)
3. as an adverb (Example: I said, like, you can\'t do this to me.)
4. a verb (Example: I like it.)
>> In my sentence, I used \"like\" as an adverb. You can check it here on this website. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Like
when I was reading this, yesterday, it is like...I felt unsad...because this kind of situation is not really common in your country.
>> When I was reading this yesterday, it was like, I felt (ahmmm) sad because this kind of situation is not really common in your country.
>> I said it this way. And I didn\'t say unsad. Unsad is also a word, but I didn\'t say that way. I\'m sorry! I think I need to remove my mannerism next time. ^^
Let\'s speaking and talking about that tomorrow.
>> I said, \"Let\'s talk about that again tomorrow.\"
>> You can listen to the recording again. Thank you!
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