Dear. Teacher Vaness

2011-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 Vaness

학생이 쓴 원문

[승무원학원/대한항공]대한항공승무원 합격자제공 특별전형 기출 영어기내방송문 Landing Ladies and gentlemen, We will be landing shortly. Please stow your carry-on baggage and return your seat back and tray table to the upright position. Also please check that your seat belt is fastened and discontinue the use of all electronic devices until the aircraft is parked at the gate. Thank you for your cooperation.

강사 첨삭

Top of Form Good morning [이름]. Thank you for providing time in writing a composition. Kindly check some of the corrections that I made. Have a nice day. Be safe. Landing Ladies and gentlemen, We will be landing shortly. >> Correct.Please stow your carry-on baggage and return your seat back and tray table to the upright position. >> Correct. Also please check that your seat belt is fastened and discontinue the use of all electronic devices until the aircraft is parked at the gate. >> Also, please check if your seat belt is fastened and discontinue the use of electronic devices until the aircraft is parked at the gate.Thank you for your cooperation. >> Correct.   Bottom of Form  

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