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It was a cold winter day. I always want to go abroad but I had no enough time and money. One day, I suddenly thought that I could be an exchange student by a program that my university provides. Since one of my cousin had been to USA as a exchange student, I questioned lots of things that I wondered before about exchange student program. She said that, "If you really want to be, just try!"

Hello Sally!   I’m very glad that you found time to write a composition. I can see your determination to learn. I know that you can easily master your English in no time because of your perseverance. You made very few flaws on your composition this time and that’s good news! Have more time studying English as well as learn more vocabularies to have more choices of words in your sentences. Do well on practicing and I believe that you could improve more. Have a great day and take care! See you tomorrow! ^_^   T. Abby “_)     Here are my corrections for you: dear. Tutor >> Dear [Name]: >> Dear [Name]: >> Hi Abby! >> Hello Abby! It was a cold winter day. >> CORRECT I always want to go abroad but I had no enough time and money. >> I always want to go abroad but I don’t have enough time and money. One day, I suddenly thought that I could be an exchange student by a program that my university provides. >> CORRECT Since one of my cousin had been to USA as a exchange student, I questioned lots of things that I wondered before about exchange student program. >> Since one of my cousins had been to the USA as an exchange student, questions started to come up and I got very curious of the exchange student program. She said that, "If you really want to be, just try!" >> She said, “If you really want to be one, try applying!” >> She told me that if I really want to become an exchange student then I have to try it. >> She told me that if I really want to become an exchange student then I have to try applying for it.